Reviews for Otsutsuki (Part I) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() The only power is the power scaling of this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() am actually surprised someone said this was the best written godlike fic but i digress, no plot,follows canon to the T, unrealistic naruto,a complete beta male despite being the MC, canon naruto is so much better than this version, your naruto keeps contemplating thing he shouldn't at all, abd you have no consistency, and even making him do things that even his canon counterpart wouldn't even do like the whole shoe shiner shit, honestly it embarassing, my favourite chapter is when yiu actually made naruto fight jigen and orochimaru before you went on to make him forget that the rinnegan could take sayuri from kabuto and he could have gone on to kill kabuto later on... you cant follow canon if you are making naruto an otsutsuki, a special one at that, he should already be better than this, with all you have given him, he should be like aizen, someone who was born superior to others, granted your naruto would be much more morally grey,like aizen of tybw, someone who values comradeship unlike aizen who doesnt really have a real ally well except tosen who was also manipulated, but naruto allies whould be people who ACTUALLY cares for him, and the only one i have seen is sayuri even if she doesnt actually his full secrets and pls when did sayuri and naruto start dating,i think i missed that part, he should have gone nukenin for peace only on a general note than fir konoha alone like itachi did. for the person below read "child of hate", an evolved rinnegan naruto, who while manipulative, still has actual real allies and its an emperial naruto fic, where he actually wants peace, even if minato was quite different there, that is a well written godlike fic, along with many others out there |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are the best writer that I have seen so far, this story has the best Godlike Naruto plot that I have read till now and an impressive amount of words, the amount of words is good enough to keep me satisfied, unlike in other fanfictions. Keep up the work bro! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter doesn’t make sense at all Naruto is weak minded, saying his powers aren’t enough. Rewrite the entire story please |
![]() ![]() ![]() The last part of the chapter is repeated. Why Naruto fighted twice? At first Neji didn't want to antagonize Naruto and later he humilliates him? Consistency please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto and Sayuri couldn't be in the next lhase of the exam, you have to pass the second with the full team. |
![]() ![]() Naruto should’ve just called them out for letting Orochimaru escaping and let them die |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, I don't want to offend or anything but it's a little strange that Naruto, when he's alone or when he's thinking, talks like a stupid person in his mind and it's strange because his stupidity is supposed to be a mask, for example, how is he going to question the warning that Yamato gave him about ROOT when he already knows that? It is not consistent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Constructive Criticism: Rewording the same thing multiple times throughout the chapter is redundant and doesn't always match what was previously stated. It also seems like a "different" Naruto every section/scene. It doesn't flow the best with how you're stating his emotions/personality through the chapter Finally, Naruto has full control of the nine tails chakra and yet he "acts" and "thinks" weak even though he could fight his peers, jonin, Gaara, and Orochimaru. Thanks for another chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should rewrite this story for the 3 time because people are disappointed with the story cause everything is canon at this point. Naruto should’ve been stronger than those that are ordering him. You have him with all these powers and still making him weak against Orochimaru. Also he should’ve revived Sakura with rinnegan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I dont understand where this is going, if he has access to the rinnegan why is he bothering with summons, and hes an otsutsuki, with the extra kama he should already be strong enough why would he need senjutsu. Not to mention that fact, why exactly is he letting hiruzen order him around. They are on the same power scale, he could outright refuse and they wouldnt be able to do anything cause it would cost them to much. Also the shoe shiner thingy was already mentioned last chapter why is he acting suprised when the secret was revealed by neji. |