Reviews for The World Beyond
leothelion chapter 2 . 8/7/2003
It getting interesting!

There is no Voldemort here... i guess he might be having another name, like say...Tom Riddle, according to your scenes for the third chapter.(just a guess)

update soon!
Paradigms chapter 2 . 8/7/2003
This is simply wonderful, please I beg of you to update soon!
gallandro-83 chapter 1 . 7/23/2003
good start

I always love to see a new story, I enjoyed the first chapter, though I hope you update soon and relief the suspense. I liked the fact that Harry took Hedwig with him when he jumped. I was hopeing that in the next chapter you let Harry have an introspective moment to assimilate all the changes. (I can accept that Fred and George except Harry's apperance as rote, but I think Harry would need a little time to himself to really relize it.) I've seen the Hermione and Neville switch before and hope that you can offer a good explanation for it in this story and maybe let Rowling's Hermione shine through.

Good luck, keep writing

gallandro_83
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