Reviews for The Gangs Of Vice City
Brogan Diesan chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
Unreadable. I don't know if it was intentional or not, but every chapter is one big paragraph and no story could be worth this amount of strain and confusion.
Phoenix Master chapter 3 . 7/25/2003
this is really good. please update and space paragraphs and writing. thanks.

Steel-Kanaeda chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Prety good but.

Ever hear of paragraph breaks?