Reviews for Yin and Yang
donoas chapter 12 . 8/9/2005
hey, awesome story. It was funny and intriguing. Please continue with asuka :)
lawless priest chapter 12 . 8/6/2005
great story folk. I hope you decide to contine this. I would love to see more.

Kemious chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
this is just great! I just love it
The Mad shoe chapter 11 . 1/21/2005
This fic is bloody great! I sure hope you will update it soon.
Lone Wulffe chapter 11 . 6/4/2004
Hahaha, this one's hilarious! I mean, TWO Shinjis! As if one wasn't enough! BTW, can you update please? I'd like to see how this one ends.
KTT-akida chapter 1 . 8/31/2003

This is my favourite fanfic on !

i'll trust in your ideas

Rion chapter 10 . 8/2/2003
Rest your mind, you deserve it. But don't take to long though.
Little Jimmy chapter 10 . 8/2/2003
Stoked chapter 10 . 8/1/2003
i swear to god if you make it a shinji and rei story i will bitch slap you.
Dany le fou chapter 9 . 7/31/2003
Right now, your fic is lacking in the humor department. The shock of having two Shinjis has worn out, and their differences don't get them in enough trouble with their friends.

Wimpy: "I got beat up and you call this no trouble?"

Dany : "Not funny trouble. Now shut up, it sounds like your growing a spine."

Maybe you could have Fate going overboard and granting any stupid wish from the EVA cast, or splitting other people. After all, it does seem to enjoy torturing mortals.
Stizzo chapter 9 . 7/31/2003
I wonder what Asuka's going to do to that girl Hitomi... Well, keep it up.
Sketch404 chapter 9 . 7/31/2003
hehe chapter 9 was a good one, keep it up _. I liked the humor in this one. yay
Xenriel chapter 9 . 7/31/2003
Cool chapter. I would put up more, but my time is limited. Nevertheless, keep this up.
HOLLA chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
... HAHAHAHAHA That was so funny! I can't wait to see what happens to the rest of the crew!
Steve VADER chapter 9 . 7/31/2003
You are running out of idea because you pressed as much as possible out of the "split Shinji" idea.

That's also the reason why the later chapters seemed not as good as the first ones.

You could surely come up with more things that could happen to the 2 Shinjis, but you are already on the verge of being boring.

2 funny moments in a chapter, which were in this one the scenes with the bridge bunnies, aren't enough.

So I would suggest that you move on with the story.

The most interesting parts are still ahead.

How you get the 2 Shinjis to become one again?

Should be interesting.

Since Shinji saw what happened during his double-time, how will he react to this events.

How will he interact now with Asuka and Rei?

There are a lot of possibilities to write.

But you have to move on to come to these parts.
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