Reviews for The Morningstar’s Rebirth |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Same stuff the original. Stupid oath. Promise not to harm the people you care about unless they attack me. Also another thing i didn't like in the original is all the misunderstandings and we already have on this one as well. What's the use of rewriting something and leaving things the same. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fallen by ForgerOfLies |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You mentioned the story Fallen a few times in your author's notes. Who's the author who wrote that. I was looking for it but haven't found it yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is genuinely fun and I’m looking forward to seeing where you take it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A masterwork of storytelling that pulses with raw intensity, weaving threads of fate, longing, and quiet revelation into an unforgettable tapestry. Every character breathes with a depth that defies the page flawed yet luminous, their struggles carving echoes of our own joys and sorrows. The prose is a symphony: elegant yet unforced, each word chosen with the precision of an artist shaping light and shadow. Scenes unfold with a cinematic grace moments of hushed vulnerability giving way to thunderous emotion, leaving an imprint that lingers long after the final passage. Neither confined by genre nor bound by convention, this is a story that transcends, a journey that doesn’t just unfold but unravels, drawing the reader into a world at once distant and deeply intimate. It is not merely read it is felt, an experience to be carried, pondered , and revisited like a beloved relic of time itself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Luna has a perfect timing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a bit over the place . dawn doesn't say his name, they mention morning star, dawn gets told to stay, dawn is at the site. sill interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I keep getting chapter not found/outdated url when trying to read chapters5 and 6, anyone else getting that weird issue? Because if I skip to chapter 7 I can read that one just fine |
![]() ![]() ![]() You wrote the intro to the story like a review which… honestly, made me NOT want to read. Good luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep it coming please it is good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry is not Lucifer, Lord of The Fallen; he is Hades, Lord of the Dead. However, he does not know his abilities as of yet. I hope that Nyxtharion reunites with Harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far but it seems that chapter 3 does not work |
![]() ![]() I love this story, please update again soon. |
![]() ![]() Yet another AI jockey |