|Reviews for Goodnight, Stars|
| DogStar13 chapter 5 . 6/13/2014
He's a Chaser. The movie just made that mistake, just because Harry himself was one
| Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 14 . 5/23/2012
Hello, I know you wrote this story ages ago and I am bad for not reviewing as I went along but I just wanted to say hi. I imagine you might write differently now as this was your first fic but I just wanted to say that in some ways I enjoyed the style, I loved how it was lily talking to Harry as a baby. I don't think you really needed the epilogue but it was nice. I like to think it was a memory dream not just a dream. I also liked the first person and third person interchanging narrative although that maybe conflicted a bit with it all being a bedtime story, but works with the dream. I can't believe someone commented on the capital P in prefects. What a silly thing to be bothered about! I hope you weren't discouraged and have written more. I think you would really benefit from a beta to read before you post and just catch silly little typos and things that you always miss as an author. Like 'torched' instead of 'tortured' and Little Wining instead of Little Whinging where the Dursleys lived. I really enjoyed the unusual way she told James about being pregnant and the fact Sirius was in on it! What I did think was a shame is how much you rushed the fic. It was still very readable but felt disappointing because you rushed through each chapter and listed things and covered whole swathes of time with just a few words. That made the story feel less clever and well written because it's quite simple to write in a listy way and to rush over things. You were so creative in places I am sure you could have added some more details in in places and slowed down the action. Like skipping all of the first 4 years in just a sentence seemed a shame. I'm sure things are different now but I just wanted to leave an honest review. I hope that's okay. Xxx
| asdfgjkl chapter 14 . 1/14/2011
that was FANTASTIC! and how you tied it all up at the end aswell! AMAZING J.K jnr!
| callmekiwi chapter 14 . 8/12/2010
Hihi! Wonderful story :) I just loved the switching from Lily's writing to the action. I know this is kinda an old story and you've probably heard this already, but James' eyes are hazel. Sorry, 'twas bothering me . K bye now :]
| liebedance chapter 2 . 5/20/2010
Oh, poor Lily sitting alone on her trunk.
And James being... like that? Impressive. For him, I mean.
I like the back and forth between Lily's notes/thoughts/whatever and scenes.
| Sunshine My Love chapter 14 . 9/8/2007
That was awsome. Ten thousand kudos to you.
| MCRkiid chapter 5 . 6/12/2007
Aw how sweet. I loved it; but I just have one thing to say. James has hazel eyes. Not brown. Awesome story by the way. & I shall finish reading. :]
| mamai black chapter 14 . 4/21/2007
Beautiful! one of the most touchble fics Ive seen
| EverVengeful chapter 14 . 4/19/2006
what a wonderfully sugar-coated story! i hope to see more from you soon.
| princessladybuggie chapter 14 . 9/24/2005
god this was absolutely beautiful. at times it was slightly cliche, but the excellent writing cancelled all that out. one thing: you say james's eyes are brown, then gray, then hazel. choose one and stick to it. keep up the great work!
| ThereWillBeLemons chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
ps. GREAT CHAPTA!
| genuinescence chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
i lub it! it's just like i imagined lily and james would meet! it's kinda sad though...*sniff*
i lubed it!
| ann black chapter 14 . 4/17/2005
| Corran Nackatori chapter 14 . 9/27/2004
Wow. This story is awesome. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. I can't wait to check out what else you have. This was truly inspired and I must thank you once again for sharing.
| Irishgirlie chapter 3 . 9/5/2004
I think this is very good so far, and written in a very unique way! Keep up the good work!