|Reviews for Ranma One Half: Sadness and Hatred|
| TheDudeAbides chapter 4 . 12/9/2005
Minor grammar nitpicks: You're is a contraction of you are, and your is a possesive pronoun.
Also, Justice is a woman. GG canon has her as the mother of Dizzy.
| Halfbreed chapter 4 . 1/17/2004
You story was really sad.); The truth is the ending is not called a prologue. It's called an epilogue. Prologues explain the begining so you get the who, what, where, and when or about someone's past.
| Lord of the Pit chapter 4 . 8/29/2003
Now that was an unexpected ending. I'm thinking about reading those books you got the idea from. Good job on writting this fic. Good luck on any to come
| The Fickle Muse chapter 4 . 8/22/2003
To me at least, it really says something when you can write a story that will hold a reader's interest for so long without him or her having much prior knowledge of the series involved.
I take a break from for a few weeks, and this is what I get to come back to.
Bravo! Well done indeed. I hope you do intend to continue this story in some way, although I understand how hard it can be at times. No matter what you choose, I commend you.
| TimeReaper chapter 4 . 8/22/2003
I love happy endings ;')
| Dragonheart7373 chapter 4 . 8/21/2003
The last chapter was kinda rushed but it was good. If you make a side story you could make it with either Ranma and his family or with Ryoga and what he is doing after the last battle.
I hope to see more stories as good as this one in the future.
| Dragonheart7373 chapter 3 . 8/15/2003
Nice work on this chapter. So Ranma is Half-Gear, I wonder what new problems this will bring him and what his Gear form will look like. I guess I'll have to wait and find out in the future chapters.
By the way, thanks for having a bigger part for Jam in this story _
| The Fickle Muse chapter 2 . 8/6/2003
"End of Chapter 6, and of Book 2. The third book might not come as fast as this one."
Well, to put it bluntly: That stinks!
It's an interesting story and aside from a few grammatical mistakes (most of which only required a second reading to fill in the right word), an enjoyable read.
Guess I'll just have to find other stories to read in the meantime as I await your next installment!
| the verve chapter 2 . 8/5/2003
I like this story!
I like alot...Just a question.
Did anybody else survive from that time?
Any of ranma's old enemies? They were pretty
strong to...saffron for example. Herb?
| TimeReaper chapter 2 . 8/5/2003
This is the first I ever guilty gear/Ranma Fic ever encountered on . Being the Dizzy playing Guilty Gear fanatic that I am and have a liking to Ranma crossovers, WoW! I was waiting an undetermined amount of time for someone to write something crossed over with guilty gear, and I got this well written piece of art. I hope to see this continued as I eagerly await the next chapters P
| Dragonheart7373 chapter 2 . 8/4/2003
I'm glad that this chapter came out so soon. There were a few grammer problems in this chapter but nothing too serious. I wished that Jam had a bigger part in this chapter but maybe she will in the future chapters. The reason is next to Dizzy, she is my favorite charater.
I hope that you will finish this story all the way through to its ending.
| CyberAngelOne chapter 2 . 8/4/2003
So I like how things are going even though I know very little about Guilty Gear.
| Lord of the Pit chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
I have never read anything like this before. Thankyou. though i feel confused as what the plot is supposed to be, but well thats probably because i never heard of the other series you are using in this cross over. I look forward to read the comming chapters. I think though that Ryouga could have waited to appear, but its yur fan fic. good luck.
| The Fickle Muse chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
There's only one thing I can really say about this fic:
I started reading this with only the background knowledge of knowing that there was some sort of video game called Guilty Gear.
I knew nothing of the characters or story, but I felt compelled to finish reading this and eagerly await more.
While there are grammatical nitpicks, it is nothing too serious to stop reading the fic over.
Overall: Good fic, and I look forward to more.
| Dragonheart7373 chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
This is the first Ranma/Guilty Gear crossover fic I've seen and it appears to be well written. The way you are writing this looks like a Ranma/Dizzy pairing.
I will keep reading this story to see how it will turn out in the end and I hope the next chapter comes out soon.