|Reviews for Eden Rising|
| Crystia chapter 2 . 8/16/2012
Aha. So I'm guessing the evil dude who stabbed the other dude with the silver knife is Kaiba's father?
I don't like Kaiba calling Joey "puppy", but otherwise, their personalities were okay...
Well, Ryou seemed a bit too "hate the world" for my taste, but I guess he is a teenager with the right to some teen angst.
The story is pretty good. Hopefully I'll find the chance to finish it some other time.
Thanks for posting!
| winnie chapter 18 . 7/16/2012
This was amazing! Although I hate angst, it makes a story even better, and I like that you (well as much as i hate it) kept Ryou away for so long and made poor Bakura go through so much..to keep us wondering..and to keep us mad at your evil cliffhangers (which i thankfully didn't have wait for:D) , and of course the the near deaths..arghh*pulls on hair*and ..making me talk to a computer saying stuff like .. ''whyy did you do that,''..or ''noooooooo, '' ... I've only done that ONCE to a book and oh so many countless times to many amazing fanfiction writers like you :D I also like how the ending was typed, everyone had their own little snippet of their amazing lives now, you didn't cut it off by saying something like ''Oh, so they lived happily ever after..the end...'' ,(...waait a minute...you did put that.. well at least you didnt cut everyone off right after their traumatic experience and not put an epilogue :D ) no, You made it InTeReStInG right from start to fin :D , there were the parts of Simone though, cause at first, I thought it was going to affect the plot, but later on i realized (..strongly think? ) the it was something like side comments ...buut, thank you, ...as a random anynomynous reader (:D) for continuing to surprise me in all that has ever happened in all of your stories, and leaving me excited for more every time i read any one :)
oh and.. whyyy did you kill Mokuba :( :( :( but it was so heartwarming to have him come back for a little bit (aww so OOC Seto XD) even if just to say 3 words:)
the ending with Malik was so funny XD...eep..i just realized something..i went back up to look at it...and..when i read it.. (before)i thought it said butter knife...it says butcher knife now...hey Isis, Marik, do you have space for 1 more? I have popcorn!
thank you for writing this amazing story and please continue to write more :)
| Strikesnake chapter 18 . 5/25/2011
complicated, so many people working for different ends, each with defferent levels of knowledge and different stratagies on how to win, but it all turned good in the end didn't it, so that's nice. i quite enjoyed this story, there are some very humourous parts and some very interesting parts, i truly enjoyed reading this, so thank you, deepest appreciation,
| bbb136 chapter 12 . 2/21/2010
Good story, lots and lots of detail. wont be finishing it though- tbh its getting a little tedious, and i have hw to do :/
| Kuroi Ruusu chapter 18 . 11/13/2009
Ack! Perfect! Simply perfect. I didn't want it to end. But having said that, the end was wonderful. I would write more, but words have escaped me at this point in time. Suffice to say, you and your writing have my unending love.
| Kuroi Ruusu chapter 14 . 11/11/2009
Beautiful. So, so beautiful. 'Kura-sama, and all that blood, and his pain and Malik's pain and... so beautiful. I want your writing talent, and I'll put it in a little box and keep it locked away safely forever and ever.
| Kuroi Ruusu chapter 12 . 11/10/2009
Gyah! Betrayal! I totally did not see that coming... and that wasn't meant as sarcastically as it sounded. I really didn't see it. And Isis too? Eep...
*Sighs in contentment*
May I just say, I've never in my entire time of reading fanfic seen Malik written so beautifully. You, my dear, are stunning.
| phoenixandtiger chapter 18 . 11/2/2009
oh my re, i know this review is very f*ing late, but seriously, i'm just a beginning to the world of fanfiction...
anyways, i loved this story. simple, pure love.
all these long-a** chapters made it a pain (no offense) to read, but I struggled through! Thank god for suspense, or I would be bored enough to suicide!
i love you i love you i love you
| Kuroi Ruusu chapter 7 . 10/12/2009
In the name of all that's holy and unholy, why have I not discovered your writing before this? You and your story are amazing. And I mean AMAZING. My poor, pretty little Mariku-chan. I've been squeeing all the way through this chapter and getting really odd looks from my room mate. Anyways...
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! But sadly I have a 1,500 word essay to write. RA-DAMMIT.
Oh, and *hugs*. Did I mention that I love you?
| Kuroi Ruusu chapter 6 . 10/8/2009
That's about the noise I made at the end of reading this chapter... Pretty, pretty, pretty 'Kura. He shouldn't have to hurt. He should go and kill those bastards and condemn them to an eternity of torture in the Shadow Realm!
And on an aside, that whole 'going down fighting' thing...
| Kuroi Ruusu chapter 4 . 9/23/2009
No! Ryou-chan! Don't hurt him!
Heh... I gasped when I realised that they were going to get him, and my brother looked at me really weirdly. I think he thinks I'm strange...
Beautiful writing as always, darling. Malik and Marik are so cute!
| Kuroi Ruusu chapter 3 . 9/21/2009
Ryou-chan is... happy? I think the world just turned upside-down. Kawaii, though!
I am intrigued. I've been guessing at evil masterminds for the past couple of chapters and have a conclusion, but it would make for an unbelievable plot-twist, so I'm reluctant to say it... I want to know now!
| Kuroi Ruusu chapter 2 . 9/20/2009
I have a feeling I said this last time, but...
Kage Noryoku... that means Shadow Magic, right? My Japanese isn't particularly amazing.
| Kuroi Ruusu chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Thank all that's holy and otherwise for people who can write. You are a rare and beautiful species. Words fail to describe my gratitude. Feel special - you have convinced me that not all yaoi is over-done and irritating. And now I must read the other chapters, because this is fast becoming worryingly addictive.
| FreakNo94 chapter 15 . 11/7/2007
cries so sad!
WAH! you spelt diaboundou wrongly! spelt like this! Diabound! D-I-A-B-O-U-N-D-O-U! XD
*munches on a cookie* *hands Ryuujitsu a cookie*