Reviews for Eternity
Sum 141 chapter 7 . 6/25/2010
Wow robotnik wins tails and manic die everything ended badly...but it was still an amazing story
Scarlet Pikachu chapter 7 . 8/4/2008
YEAH, THE ENDING TEARS AT MY MIND, IT'S SOO ASTOUNDINGLY AWSOME! tHE FUNNEHS AT THE END WORK WELL TO CHEER ME UP ALWAYS, I've read this thing 16 times, but it never gets old! Sorry 'bout the all caps thing at the begginning...
writergurlLW chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
This story is amazing and well written. I'll be saving it so that I can continue reading it tomorrow.
GothicLance chapter 6 . 9/20/2007
Awsome story. I loved it, even for the tragic ending.
Extra guy without purpose chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
I didn't expect the ending to be like that, with Robotnik's victory. Great story.
Asher Tye chapter 7 . 3/30/2007
Definitely going into my favorites, even if i didn't like how Tails ended up. Most definitely one of the best stories out there.
erosgirl chapter 7 . 12/8/2006
Pretty cool! I like this kind of a lot. First off, I just love the premise for Tails' death scene. I'm just a sucker for hostage situations/innocent kids getting ripped off by the bad guy. But nice job. I liked it a lot. Especially all the talk about how to deal with ghosts. It was pretty nifty!

Second, that ending was pretty nifty. Never saw it coming. I know exactly that feeling you're trying to create, but right now I think it's more of a cold fear taking hold, eternally. The only thing I can think of is to add something along the lines of "Oh d-" to the end. (Please pardon my hyphens.) I think that that would help it get that feeling, but of course it's your story, so do whatever you want.
Kalana Fox chapter 7 . 2/24/2006
Interesting way of describing writing. I describe it as weaving a quilt.

Anyway, I really liked your story. It was very funny. I'd just like to say that because I've had personal experiences with ghosts, it might be in your best interest to know ghosts CAN touch you. I was hugged by one more than once, soothingly though.

You don't need to fear ghosts. It's the type of ghost you're dealing with that you should be scared as all Hell of. But you probably don't want me going into that so I won't.

Anyway, great story, I really enjoyed reading it!
Doll Face Sally chapter 7 . 12/4/2005
Its awsome, just how Manic tells is awesome itself.
Syb chapter 8 . 9/7/2003
Wonderful story! except that the endind is a bit too abrut to my taste.. but that's just me!

Oh and it's the first time I see deleted scene in a fanfic! That was so funny! I absolutely loved the first deleted scene! _

Bravo!

I hope to see more story from you in the future!
Future Reminiscence chapter 8 . 9/5/2003
It is a crime that this story has recieved such a small number of reviews. A truly great piece, one of my favorites her.
Sarah Pixen chapter 6 . 8/30/2003
YAY! . Poor Manic!
Sarah Pixen chapter 5 . 8/22/2003
Sorry! I forgot to sing in! :p hehe... Anyway, Another GREAT chapter! YAY! :D

...And yes, I mean it when I said I want to draw some fanart. I've got a DeviantART gallery, sarahpixen)So you can look at some of the work I do as a... past time(?)... Just so you know what kind of an artist I am. .
Sarah Pixen chapter 3 . 8/20/2003
O.O Whoa... :D ! Can I do some fanart for this?

'Cuz it's just wounderful! .
Syb chapter 4 . 8/18/2003
One of the best fanfic I read starring Manic! _ Can't wait to see what will happen!
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