Reviews for A Little Too Much Rum
sessi chapter 24 . 4/9/2013
hi!

i think it was a really good story but i can't get past the fact that you didn't give any explenation to why she had those dreams. It would have been nice if you gave an explenation to how and why she had them, 'cause right now it's just something that doesn't really fit in, like you just threw it in somewhere.

If you ever rewrite this story then maybe you should think about that, other than that was the story really good!

sincerely

sessi
StartingAtTheEnd chapter 24 . 1/20/2013
This story is brilliant. I loved it from beginning to end. I couldn't stop reading it. And the ending, it was truly amazing. I love it. You made this an incredible story. Good job. :)
bluephoenix65069 chapter 24 . 11/10/2009
AAWW.. does jack ever come back for her?
in the turning of the knife chapter 17 . 8/17/2007
oh shit...this could be...um, awkward...
in the turning of the knife chapter 16 . 8/17/2007
Finally...took them long enough! *sighs*

why couldn't Ibe a movie character, to live every time a movie played? *dreams*
in the turning of the knife chapter 15 . 8/17/2007
da da... da!
in the turning of the knife chapter 14 . 8/17/2007
*grins* pirates...I love pirates
in the turning of the knife chapter 13 . 8/17/2007
you must be getting annoyed with all my continuous reviews...but good show :)
in the turning of the knife chapter 11 . 8/17/2007
O...
in the turning of the knife chapter 10 . 8/17/2007
:)
in the turning of the knife chapter 8 . 8/17/2007
really? I always wanted a compass that didn't point North...

great chapter :) *joins in dancing*
in the turning of the knife chapter 6 . 8/17/2007
*claps hands* let the battle begin!
in the turning of the knife chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
I believe I started reading this story some time ago...but I never finished it...I'm excited to continue.
MorgauseNokami chapter 24 . 7/12/2007
Aww, it's finished? Well, the ending is great. Except for the Pearl sinking, that won't work *grin*
CupCakeCullen chapter 24 . 6/10/2007
oh em gee. love it like woah!

sequel?

please!

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