This is very well written story. I enjoyed the drama and high emotions. The villain was delightfully cruel and I like how Norrington's sense of honor wouldn't allow him to let Jack die for something he didn't do. Well done.

Yes I have just reread this again

This story was amazing! I'd extend this review if it wasn't nearly 1 AM and I wasn't on my phone. But tou did so well with this. So many feels. I don't think you're insane by torturing Jack, I do the same despite him beingy favorite character. I have some odd obsession with torturing my favorite characters, I'll admit it.

I think this is the 3rd time I’ve read this entire story but I love it so much! So it provided a nice Saturday night entertainment while trying to avoid thinking about the hell of work in the morning! Not sure if you still read these but I do hope you write more for the pirate soon restore my faith in the potc world lol.

HISTORICAL INACCURACY TIME

Pirates wouldn't be given more than 3 days tops before they were to hang, you gave a whole week at the start of the story, and a further 5 days at the end.

But that's just because I didn't know what else to write here, since everything was pretty on-pointe so thanks a bunch for writing this!

I loved every second of it!

I like how you talk about miscarriages of plots when Elizabeth's giving birth.

your author note at the start of the chapter urged me to complete my university assignment, finish studying for an exam i forgot i had in 3 hours (mind you, it's like 3 am lol), and helped me help my bird through its night terrors.

You are a blessing. never forget that.

I've got to be honest with you... I only really clicked on this story because it was posted- literally on the day I was born. 07/26/03. I'm not gonna read any further, though because it will probably give me nightmares.

This was lovely

This is an amazing book! I absolutely love it. Continue with the great work!

Aww this was too perfect! Just what I needed when my love for this franchise and character returned! Going to see if you have anything else!

I have to say... You know it's been a good fic when you get to the end of it and require arm flailing to deal with all the emotions that it has made you feel! This Fic was superb! Thanks for writing it! :)

nice

This was bloody amazing! ;) Wish I'd discovered it sooner, but I haven't been reading Pirates of the Caribbean fanfiction for very long. Great job, you're a very talented writer.

I'm crying right now, the melodramatic, sheltered, over-emotional snob that I am. You're story is beautiful. I could only pray to have the level of skill you so clearly possess with words.

I have one criticism for your story. I'm sorry but I feel like I should say it: I feel as though making Brian, a young man who Elizabeth and Will only knew for eight months, one of the godfathers seems rash on the parents part. I understand Commander Norrington, but not Brian. The vibe I got from that bit was a lack of diversity of characters. I may have missed an important bit of sentimentalism that justified that, but I felt like I should let you know.

Brilliant story. Thank God you had him get better, I would have been devastated if you hadn't.