Loved your story

am i the only one hoping he would hate everyone and go his own way? in this story, i hate Dumbledore, and dislike tom

I guess i want to claim my statement how you plot this story especially tom/sev that's amazingggg i love it

i never imagined how severus with tom doing stuff
But its amaazingggg

Is that suppose to mean severus is voldemort's lover?

So interesting and unique. I really enjoyed this.

Well this was short and good. I perticulary liked the scene of the fight between Harry and Sirius.

How is it that the werewolf with his enhanced senses and the dog animagus whom must have seen Harry in his dog form, has not smelled that Harry is not Harry, and smelled WHO he is?

I can, to some degree get Remus IF he retains zero wolf traits in his human form. But I KNOW Sirius saw Harry MANY times while being a dog. And spent years with Wormtail, enough to remember his scent just as well as his face.

So why haven't they noticed anything from the start?

Is Severus suicidal? He swore an unbreakable Oath to protect Harry, when Harry was a baby. And he KNOWS that Dumbledore will either pit him against Voldemort or kill him.

Both scenarios will make Harry end up dead. And knowing that Harry loves the Dark Lord so much, he wouldn't have wanted too.

He already failed his Oath, and is living on pure luck, because he just endangered the very boy he swore to protect. If Harry dies, so does Snape.

And that is without cobsidering why he joined the dark lord to begin with, but your story is already a bit AU...disturbingly so towards the old goat. *Shudders* So I'll defer to your AU rules rather than Canon on that one.

Still... Very stupid choice. And Snape is 100% calulating, paranoid and careful, usually.

That fiction was just marvelous and really really well written. The way you depict the passing of the years through Severus' reports is "coup de maître".
Thank you

Brilliant brilliant story -the very first Tom/Harry I ever read- (Sev is great as well) I'm happy as a clam for finding it again:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Wow

WOW
i can't even say anything.
your story is soooo amazing.
i don't have anything else to say
except how great your story are.
now i'm going to check your other story.
Thank You for your incredibly amazing story.
i think i love your brain.
errr ignore the last one it sound creepy.
once again THANK YOU.

I enjoyed your story immensely, especially the psychological battle within Snape. Also your character depth was very good. A lot of fan fictions have a good story line or idea, but they usually are missing character depth. You made the characters your own without destroying the originals. Thank you for this read and please keep on writing.

sincerely,
Imogene17

this is my favourite story :)