Reviews for The Rain
Jenny chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
Will,

Another great story. I really liked it. I bet it would have touched me a little more if I knew the Roin Warriors, but I don't - sorry. Anyway, loved it and can't wait for a new one.
Isabel Night chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
That was a beautiful story. I didn't find any major grammar problems, but I think you handled the subject of someone who dies very well. I personally get offended when someone can't take death seriously, but I'm still believe in the Old Roman Traditions.

The rating is safe. I guess you've got that problem fixed. _

But what happened to Sage? Did he die naturally? Or did he die doing the ultimate act of love?

But other than that question, it was a beautiful and carefully thought out story.

Isabel Night