|Reviews for One Last Stand|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/23/2015
okay okay okay how the hell does this not have at leats one thousand reviews and favs. this is unbelievable. this story was just perfect.
| Ac314159 chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
Aw man that was definitely amazing. I have sorta been wondering how they would die or what they would do after there wives died too. I have read others but this is by far the best.
| Coofis chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
This was such a touching story. I felt tears welling up by the end...what a bittersweet passing for the two most powerful fighters in the universe! I especialy loved how you portrayed Vegeta, as he is my favorite character.
However, I do ask that you work on your sentence structure. Sometimes, in the middle of a sentence, you would switch from different sentence tenses. Also, there were several grammar mistakes.
But other than that, this was absolutely beautiful. I loved it, and it's going straight to my Favorites List.
| DrPepper4Ever chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
*sniff* That was beautiful... I thought you did a great job in portraying the characters, and your writing style keeps me interested in reading. Thanks for posting this :)
| elleelle chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
This was really beautifully written. This should have been the ending to the series.
| Kitty Falcon chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
I liked this story a lot. It's, if not the funniest story I read, then the one whose humor touches me the most.
| ImagingThings chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Nice. I love the idea of having them go out like this.
| 61743 chapter 1 . 9/1/2003
This was a strong story, but it would win if you spend a bit time checking your grammar and sentence construction. Even for me as a non-native English speaker, it's hard to read.
The characterization was okay. Good work there. Keep on writing (and I hope that the feedback is okay. I hope that you don't pick it up as a flame, because it isn't meant to be one.)
| scrappster chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
great, just awesome. I love how you basically gave us a small sliver of the emotions both were possibly feeling. I could really feel vegeta at the end with his joy and pure...I donno what, but I could tell the joy he had in seeing the face that he probably was longing to see. Kinda like...I donno, *cough* anyway, I loved it, and I'm trying to get my sis to read it, cause she really likes goku, and I know there's a part of this at the beginning she'd love. Anyway, it's a great story with a lot of hidden emotions, and I really liked it.
| Chuquita chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
Aww! That was so sweet! *sniffle*.
| Saiko Senshi chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
aww, sniff, that's .. Beautiful.
You wrote it very well, good job!
| meressefers chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
*sniffles* That was beautifully poignant.