|Reviews for New Beginnings|
| Callialex chapter 21 . 5/4
I really like this story! I wish you would finish it-I'd love yo see where you were going with it.
| TheTequilaGirl chapter 21 . 2/8
You promised not to abandon it !
That's not a decent thing to do.
| MJPotter17 chapter 21 . 12/22/2014
This is an awesome story!
Please please continue!
| Gunreal chapter 17 . 11/11/2014
Yeah... Whatever... Fuck you...
| HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 4 . 3/15/2014
| HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 2 . 3/15/2014
| constant3 chapter 21 . 9/27/2013
Ok. So first of all I'm sure you know that the beginning of this story is pretty rough. You can tell it was probably one of your earlier works and has a lot of 'this doesn't make any sense' aspects to it. That being said, the story just kept improving and getting better and better. I wanted to also tell you that being a huge fan of Harry/Hermione pairings, this chapter had the best Harry/Hermione scenes I think I have ever read. There was just something so... innocent about it. It really captured the complexity of Harry's teenage inclinations paired with his mature view of reality because of how his life has gone so far. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it. I hope someday you can pick this back up because I was also completely appalled by Rowlings pairings, and I think their relationship deserves a good ending.
| whatweareafreaidof chapter 19 . 4/24/2013
Good, love the Harry and Ron talk, but you need a Ron and hermonie talk
| Fatemaker chapter 21 . 10/24/2012
Its a real shame you never finished this
| Sarek5959 chapter 21 . 10/18/2012
Harmonians Forever . . . what book 6? or 7 for that matter . . .and let's not even mention the crapilogue.
This story hasn't been updated in quite some time and that's a shame as it has an original plot line and characters that aren't too OOC so that makes it believable.
| try2findme chapter 21 . 7/21/2012
You should finish it
| C.dowsett chapter 21 . 6/16/2011
my lord your right, its 2011 and i only just read the last two books, as soon as it turned harry ginny i stopped caring for 5 years.
| H Harmon chapter 19 . 5/29/2011
I am having a hard time finishing the rest of this story. It’s a shame really, I do like the way that you write. The ideas seem to flow very well and are totally understandable, but the problems are few although important to me. First, while Harry might not understand what love is, and the differences are, he is not stupid. You, as most other fan-fic writers make him as dense as a brick. He could never hurt Hermione like that; besides, he would never keep something like that from her. Second, this is closely related to number three, Harry has the most amazing reflexes and agility seen in a long time. Then why, when he knows it is coming, can’t he doge, nor even tries to, the simplest of spells from Ron, Voldemort and Malfoy; and why does he get hit every time someone swings at him? Third, one of the things that made Harry Potter series so good in my opinion, is that when JKR invented a something unbelievable or an unbelievable situation she explained how it could exist in our world making the most implausible in fact plausible. She set up rules and stuck to them, at least until HBP. In one paragraph you talk about how safe #12 is and you mention that it is un-plotable, well that means that no one, even if they know it, can inform others of its location except the secret keeper. Even if Jugson was told by the secret keeper, Dumbledore, he couldn’t have relayed it to anyone. There were more instances of rules bending to fit the plot, rather than the plot twisting to follow the rules. Lastly, this is a HHR fic and in chapter 19, out of 21, where are they? You categorized this fic as Action/Romance, but if you were to look up angst in the dictionary you would find this fic. It is a shame too, I would have liked to have finish this story, and I don’t think that you are going to ever finish it.
| serenityselena chapter 21 . 5/29/2011
love the story...
hope you will continue it _
| B. Oots chapter 21 . 2/6/2011
Please update soon, so I can read, what is going on in the great hall?