Reviews for Bodyguards |
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Red chapter 19 . 3/17 Like any good Inuyasha fanfic should end: Osuwari. This was fun to read! Sayonara! |
Red chapter 10 . 3/17 Kouga: “For a guy like that, hurt his pride is even better than actually hurting him.” Kagome: “If you can’t hit him in the body, hit him in the ego. Hurt his pride!” (s1 ep6) |
Red chapter 3 . 3/17 Shippo’s excuse for his family would be less of a lie if he said that his mom died when he was younger, and his dad died when a thunderstorm set their house on fire, or in some kind of electrical accident (hinting to his dad being killed by the Thunder Brothers). |
Red chapter 11 . 1/1 Sha-la-la-la-la-la, float away, do what the music say; go on and kiss the girl… Kiss the girl… Kiss the girl… C’mon you got to kiss the girl! |
Red chapter 5 . 1/1 First Kouga, then a mention of Ayame; who’s next? Sesshoumaru? I’d like to see Fluffy’s human disguise. |
Red chapter 5 . 1/1 WHAT?! KOUGA?! You’ve gotta be kidding me! On the bright side, he picked Ayame. I can see Kouga as a PE teacher, biology? HA! |
Red chapter 3 . 1/1 You picked a nice name for Kagome’s mom. “Ai” Is actually the Japanese word for “love”. I wonder how Buyo and Kirara will get along? Oh, and you could’ve had Sango’s last name be “Taijiya”, meaning “exterminator/slayer”. |
Red chapter 2 . 1/1 There are a few cracks in this chapter: 1. Inuyasha doesn’t turn full youkai when he’s angry, he isn’t the Hulk. He turns full youkai when he’s close to death. 2. I’m pretty sure the reason Inuyasha can travel through the Well is because he was pinned to the tree whose wood was used to make the Well in the first place. A more understandable way for the others to pass through the Well would be possessing objects from the future, like the watches Kagome gave them. |
Red chapter 1 . 1/1 Kagome teaching Shippo how to read… so sweet! The mother-child relationship they have warms my heart. |
wolfwind42 chapter 6 . 8/16/2022 Was Inuyasha holding back? Because if he wasn't, I have to call bullshit on that fight. I don't care how good this guy is at Karate, he doesn't hold a candle to Inuyasha. Inuyasha is just too fast and too strong. Also, what did he mean when he said he would tap into his youkai strength? that makes no sense. His demon abilities aren't different from what he can usually do. Those are just his abilities. That would be like a boxer saying "I'll have to tap into my boxing skills" when he's fighting a regular guy. It makes no sense. |
wolfwind42 chapter 2 . 8/16/2022 I mean, they don't have to be super smart. They don't have to learn everything taught in school, just the essentials. Basic math, reading and writing, and basic history and science. They don't have to be the best in the class, they just have to fit in. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2021 this is gonna be soooo~ good! |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/15/2021 He loves his little sis, the way she is at school ! |
loveinu chapter 16 . 12/1/2020 "is this guy human?" the answer would be...NO, toji, he's not human. you messed with the wrong girl, buddy. i'll light a candle for you. |
Guest chapter 14 . 6/22/2017 That explanation of what Sesshomaru did to Rin is stupid. Rin was and is too clingy. Sesshomaru WOULD NOT have fallen in love with Rin and done that. Sesshomaru was in love with Kagura. Sess/Rin, Sess/Kagome and Kouga/Kagome are the worst pairings in this fandom. |