|Reviews for Practically Brothers|
| Ice Lupus chapter 3 . 8/23/2003
Remus being a beta and the appearance of Baron was an excellent idea. Loved this chapter.
| Ice Lupus chapter 2 . 8/23/2003
One of the most tender fics I ever read. Enjoyed it tremendously.
| Ice Lupus chapter 1 . 8/23/2003
I'm in love with it. It's beautiful.
| Anterastilis chapter 3 . 8/23/2003
I liked that a lot! It's fun to see Snape and Lupin getting along like that. I'm glad that you posted another chapter. _
| Tristan2 chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
Aww! That was so sweet and so believable! Really good job of keeping things in character- I really loved it! Nice! :D
| N Snape chapter 2 . 8/20/2003
I liked this a lot, I think that you *must* go on!
Ive put you in my favorite stories list! :)
| Cinnamon3 chapter 2 . 8/18/2003
Hehe, I love this stuff - where Snape rests his grievences with Black or Lupin. I like it a little silly, the red ball was great. Snape siriusly needed to chill and that was perfect. But you kept him in character through it.
Yadda, yadda, yadda... please write more! Lots more... update, update!
| Anonymous chapter 2 . 8/18/2003
OK, when do we get Chapter 3?
This one was even better then the first chapter.
| Operafloozy chapter 2 . 8/15/2003
I usually don't review (yes, I know, I'm an evil, evil reader who deserves all of the porn spam she gets), but something about this fanfic just worked for me. The little details-Remus's embarassment, Severus being a little disconcerted with his own actions-just added up. In any case, I liked it and hope that you write more.
| TaraAmber chapter 2 . 8/15/2003
Oh, I like it! I like it alot. I hope you write more. This isn't the end, is it?
| Clio chapter 2 . 8/14/2003
I like your second chapter a bit better than the first, which is a bit fluffy in the middle. I just can't imagine Snape, however drugged, saying things like 'nobody ever liked me' to Lupin. In the second chapter you have them both better in character, I think. But that's just my personal debatable opinion. I love the part where Lupin comes in with the red ball, and also your idea about Lupin eating dog food because it's cheaper is great.
Now to the praise: You have got talent, you really do. I read a lot of Snape fanfic, for more than 2 years now. (Bad addiction, I tell you.)There are horribly bad pieces around and truely excellent ones. Your fic belongs to the latter ones.
It is actually the best I have read in quite a time (inspite of the melodrama in ch.1 :) ).
Keep on writing, no matter if you write a third chapter for this fic or if you start a new one. You are really, really good.
Personally I would love to see the Snape/ Lupin bonding a bit more explored as long as you keep it on a friendship base and don't make it slash. You certainly have the talent to do so.
| Rogue Shadow Lurker chapter 2 . 8/14/2003
I really liked this one, and think you should definatly continue it. I would like to see where this is going, and I like the idea of the two of them being friends.
| StarbladeXV chapter 2 . 8/14/2003
The story's good; keep it up. I like the idea of the two of them being friends (it is just friends, right?) and Snape having a heart(he's my favorite character, and Lupin's a close second :o)
| crockywock chapter 2 . 8/14/2003
I LURVE them! Both of them. The second one is very sweet. Very funny and SO intriguing. I was sighing all the time.
The first chapter, on the other hand... wow! It is beyond compare. I was sitting there in awe - laughing sometimes ("You're as bad as he is." :D), but mostly doing some very deep thinking. Much of what you write - hidden theories and stuff - are so probable. So understandable for me. And the language is beautiful. Very in character, too.
Lemme see... I especially liked "He did promise me power, so that no one could ever hurt me again." I think that is very likely to be true, given what we learn in ch28 of OOtP. And I so hope JKR lets the two of them talk sometime in book 6 or 7. They both deserve to become friends, don't you think?
Hm - enough rambling. I will recommend your story to a couple of friends if you don't mind. ;) It is really very well done.
| chiri chapter 2 . 8/14/2003
I love it, wonderful story. The second part even better than the first, I liked the interaction betweedn 'doggy' Remus und Severus. Very nice, please write more.