|Reviews for Practically Brothers|
| Amber-and-Ash chapter 3 . 8/24/2003
This is stunning - poignant and angsty and beautiful. Severus and Lupin finding light in the darkness.
| Lucathia Rykatu chapter 3 . 8/24/2003
Another great chapter. I just love this story. It makes me smile so much. The descriptions in the beginning of this chapter are very very beautiful. And then Snape saying "Lupin, you know I can't throw that frisbee thing." LOL. Love that frisbee. And then Lupin running to the shower! I also liked that encounter w/ Lupin's old pack and how Snape defended Lupin. The ending's great too, when Lupin makes Snape stay for the full moon and Snape says "I am definitely not your alpha." Okay...looking at what I just wrote...hehe, I basically like the WHOLE chapter. Everything was great. Every sentence was great. I hope you write more for this story! :)
| Alex Lyons3 chapter 3 . 8/24/2003
Wow! This was great. Keep up the good work. I really liked how you started this out. Everybody who writes one of these Snape and Lupin friendship stories usually always start out with them being friends back in school, but then after Lupin nearly kills Snape in The Shrieking Shack they part ways. This was definitely new and a nice change from those. Please write more, I'd love to see where your going to go with this.
| Ice Lupus chapter 3 . 8/23/2003
Remus being a beta and the appearance of Baron was an excellent idea. Loved this chapter.
| Ice Lupus chapter 2 . 8/23/2003
One of the most tender fics I ever read. Enjoyed it tremendously.
| Ice Lupus chapter 1 . 8/23/2003
I'm in love with it. It's beautiful.
| Anterastilis chapter 3 . 8/23/2003
I liked that a lot! It's fun to see Snape and Lupin getting along like that. I'm glad that you posted another chapter. _
| Tristan2 chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
Aww! That was so sweet and so believable! Really good job of keeping things in character- I really loved it! Nice! :D
| N Snape chapter 2 . 8/20/2003
I liked this a lot, I think that you *must* go on!
Ive put you in my favorite stories list! :)
| Cinnamon3 chapter 2 . 8/18/2003
Hehe, I love this stuff - where Snape rests his grievences with Black or Lupin. I like it a little silly, the red ball was great. Snape siriusly needed to chill and that was perfect. But you kept him in character through it.
Yadda, yadda, yadda... please write more! Lots more... update, update!
| Anonymous chapter 2 . 8/18/2003
OK, when do we get Chapter 3?
This one was even better then the first chapter.
| Operafloozy chapter 2 . 8/15/2003
I usually don't review (yes, I know, I'm an evil, evil reader who deserves all of the porn spam she gets), but something about this fanfic just worked for me. The little details-Remus's embarassment, Severus being a little disconcerted with his own actions-just added up. In any case, I liked it and hope that you write more.
| TaraAmber chapter 2 . 8/15/2003
Oh, I like it! I like it alot. I hope you write more. This isn't the end, is it?
| Clio chapter 2 . 8/14/2003
I like your second chapter a bit better than the first, which is a bit fluffy in the middle. I just can't imagine Snape, however drugged, saying things like 'nobody ever liked me' to Lupin. In the second chapter you have them both better in character, I think. But that's just my personal debatable opinion. I love the part where Lupin comes in with the red ball, and also your idea about Lupin eating dog food because it's cheaper is great.
Now to the praise: You have got talent, you really do. I read a lot of Snape fanfic, for more than 2 years now. (Bad addiction, I tell you.)There are horribly bad pieces around and truely excellent ones. Your fic belongs to the latter ones.
It is actually the best I have read in quite a time (inspite of the melodrama in ch.1 :) ).
Keep on writing, no matter if you write a third chapter for this fic or if you start a new one. You are really, really good.
Personally I would love to see the Snape/ Lupin bonding a bit more explored as long as you keep it on a friendship base and don't make it slash. You certainly have the talent to do so.
| Rogue Shadow Lurker chapter 2 . 8/14/2003
I really liked this one, and think you should definatly continue it. I would like to see where this is going, and I like the idea of the two of them being friends.