|Reviews for A Mask of Scarlet|
| ret chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
good story. I love wanda stuff, but i really hate Toad. it would have been really great if you got rid of Toad, changed one or two lines and added Pietro instead. Keep up the good work
| anaisninja01 chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
You're right; this one isn't as good as your others. It seems much more forced, not as natural. But that's what writer's block does. It's still a good piece with important concepts, especially the distinction between Wanda and Scarlet Witch. Being in "costume", so to speak, changes all of the characters. You touched on this idea in "Hiding in Plain Sight", but I think you've expanded on it here, especially as it concerns Wanda. She's always the Scarlet Witch; that's all anyone sees. But there's significantly more to her than meets the eye. I hope you'll explore this idea further when you get over your writer's block. It could make for a really classic story.
| X-Girl4 chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
It was still great...but I have read some of your work I like ...Still loved it though!:)