Reviews for Lies in the world my world
cevec chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
You got something good going. I'll be interested to see where this goes because you got a good idea. A little confusing during the speech times, because you're never sure whose speaking and whose point of view its coming from. That was the only wrong thing I could find!
Well done, continue continue!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
Good Story so far i found a lot of spelling mistakes and it is confusing who point of you it is when you say I in this story it seems like its coming from one of konokos this story doesnt seem to be going any where but i'm sure you have something planned for konoko and her Freinds/Enemys.