That was great!

Does Vegeta get to stay on Earth or will he have to go back to Hell?

I hope Vegeta gets to stay.

Update soon

Sorry for using review.I can't PM right I have your email or something?Its harder to send links over fanfiction.

Very interesting prelude, I haven't even looked up Dragon ball for ages you know, loved it since i was a kid. This sounds so interesting shall be reading on now

plz hurry and update im hooked...ON PHONICS! lol! no really plz update soon thank you and good luck

i love the storie please continue

this is the best story that i have read in a long time i only hope that you update soon... question though if and when you do undate i was just wonderin if pain was going to start training and get in on the action hope to read your next chapter soon

Ok at first I thought I would right a review when I read all the chapters that you wrote but NOPE It's to good and forced me to write a review _ I GIVE YOU A DOUBLE THUMBS UP and the reward of me thinking it's so good that I'm not going to go crazy wich is EXCELENT _ Rock on ~ oh wait that's not right it's KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK O ~ did I sound like a teacher or what

i love this so next chapter!

this story is worth respect, update soon friend.

Wow, all sorts of stuff happening here. Buu, Brolly, Ma-jins, it's like there's no end to the enemies. The next couple of chapters should be pretty interesting. One thing I noticed is that it seemed like this chapter needed a bit of proof reading. There were quite a few grammar mistakes (were vs. we're) that probably wouldn't have been hard to notice. Also, everytime a new person speaks it needs to be in a new paragraph, otherwise the reader looses track of who's saying what. Other than that, good job.

Jeeze girl, that's a lot of villians you gotta deal with! lol But I like stories that have the good guys fight a hord of villians and demons! Speaking of villains, is Babidi talking about controlling Trunks or Aioshi? I hope it's Trunks!

Can't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE SOON!

hey nice fic, are you going ti continue?

so you goint to have an army of 8 billion agenst brolly this should be interesting please update soon. the otheer thing is can you make the chaps a little bit longer please thank you.

Very good story

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I've really enjoyed your story so far. You've kept the Mirai Trunks timeline while adding new characters and interesting twists of your own. It's all very enjoyable and I can't wait until your next chapter!

I hope Dabura fights Trunksie poo soon! I want Dabura to beat him up first then Trunks can kill him. I love the idea of Trunks begging for his life in front of Babidi. I know it would never happen but the thought of it is...satisfying.

MUAHAHAHAHAHA! I love your story so far!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!