Reviews for Elves, Hobbits, & MarySues, Oh My!
Desolaterose1 chapter 56 . 11/17/2017
Where's the epilogue!?
bookaddict19 chapter 25 . 1/14/2017
I loved the whole "Gandalf? How was death? I hope you liked it. 'Cause if anything happens to either one of them, you get to repeat the experience." part. That was just priceless. :D
snowleopard314 chapter 18 . 12/10/2016
Just had to coment. The first time I read what the capital city of rohan I am pretty sure I read it medimusil. So no, she is not the only one. Good job!
Calenataure chapter 12 . 8/2/2016
Hmm. I'm genuinely confused at why this is a Mary sue parody, because a thousands of years old Elf prince would *not* fall in love with, or remotely harbor romantic feelings for a teenage human girl, unless he has legitimately gone mad and requires a psychologist. In order for a romantic relationship between an Elda much the senior of a mortal, the mortal would likely be wise beyond their years and at the very least an ADULT human.

*UNLESS*... Kayli is meant to be a Sue herself, on which case, congratulations in your parody, since this would be a masterpiece hiding a sue parody inside of a sue parody, if you get what I mean! XD
If the aforementioned scenario is the case, I'd like to nitpick at a teensy little thing- the three sues would not have known how to communicate with anyone else since Westron was spoken in Arda, not English.
Whyhow chapter 12 . 2/2/2016
I think that the characters are interesting and realistic, but I am not sure that the romantic subplot adds anything to the story.
Whyhow chapter 6 . 2/1/2016
This is my favorite chapter so far. I really like your interpretation of Pippin, and I find the super short sections a bit disorienting.
RandomFandoms14 chapter 42 . 7/18/2015
"Time to write slash about Aragorn and Gollum," the rabid fangirl says.

Nope. AraWen ftw!
RandomFandoms14 chapter 7 . 7/18/2015
"He's beautiful. I watch him because he's beautiful..." That sounds sort of like Elijah Woods' fake interview...
theawesomeyvetel chapter 18 . 4/24/2015
Actually, when I first read the second book, my first thought was something like, 'Medusa? Well, this ain't ending well,'.
Paralelsky chapter 56 . 4/22/2015
This story has been so precious! It made me laugh out loud, it made me gasp and it also made me want to go on reading until the end. And beyond that. So thank you for the wonderful hours I've spent reading it. :)
biddle29 chapter 41 . 9/20/2014
I'm seriously...I think I'm dying XD
biddle29 chapter 39 . 9/20/2014
HA! I love Thranduil and Gimli together! Can you imagine what tortures Legolas will suffer now that those two are becoming friends? The therapy sessions will be endless! XD
biddle29 chapter 38 . 9/20/2014
I think Gimli and Thranduil could actually get along really well if they tried, I mean just look at the two! They can always find common ground in making fun of Legolas! XD
biddle29 chapter 36 . 9/20/2014
Do you realize how hilarious this was? I'm literally on the ground I'm laughing so hard! XD That was divine!
Guest chapter 56 . 9/4/2014
Kayli was an awful character. I could tolerate her at first but then she became unpleasant. She's was not much different than those other two Mary Sues.
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