Reviews for FFX Yevon Cup
Slacker Mentality chapter 1 . 8/5/2003
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bratkitty chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
The story was overall good. I like reading fics about blitzball. _

You may want to work on your adjectives a bit. I noticed you were using some of the same ones over and over, for example "ameteur" to describe the Aurochs.

Your narration was good, you sounded like a sports announcer, just be a bit more descriptive and i think you'll have a winner.

Good job!