Reviews for Harry Potter And The Legacy Of Gryffindor
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2017
Good Nice
GF chapter 7 . 1/12/2014
When is ch 7 taking place? After the October quidditch match, and maybe a week more that Cho has been hospitalized? So, late October in Northern Scotland... and Harry meets Cho at the gate, and they walk to the lake to watch sunset... which was about four HOURS AGO, that time of year! (three, minimum... depending on if Scotland has anything like 'daylight saving's time' in the Midwest U.S.) (it would have to be July to still even be light out at nine p.m.)
GF chapter 5 . 1/12/2014
What was Wood's comment in Harry's third year? "I don't care if she's pretty, knock her off her BROOM!"
G Fawkes chapter 4 . 1/12/2014
I know there are LOTS of people who have read three , four, ten times more fics and for many more years than I have. That said, I have NEVER heard of anyone allowing any spell to have the color GREEN other than the killing curse (avada kadavra for those who like to use it as a verb (again wrong), or say "he A.K.'d someone". )
I also don't believe for a second that Draco "I've wanted to be a death eater all my life" Malfoy would begin a duel with an impediment jinx, nor use it again after it's first failure. (the rest of his 'arsenal' was more befitting)
Next..." a green curse coming straight for his head, one he didn't recognize, nor knew how to block"...
Ya' think maybe you just DUCK anything GREEN and don't try to BLOCK what you HAVE TO assume MAY be an UNFORGIVABLE!? Unless you have transfigurable debris available and can put a barrier between you and the curse ( or conjure one), you avoid the curse.
I DID love that Harry gave him back his wand and let him try again... only to wipe the floor with his dumb ass... I just wish someone would let him be OoC enough to enjoy it... not cry, not puke, not run to Dumbledick, and not question whether he's 'going dark' or not!
(must be a bit of what I've heard called the 'pussification' of the world. Kids are babied, made to wear bike helmets, let to play soccer and 'no one loses' or 'everyone plays' type sports, and then we wonder why no one knows how to 'suck it up' and do what needs done when stuff needs done.
I guess unless you've played defensive end or tackle, and have rushed a quarterback, sacked him HARD, and left him flaying on the ground to be carried off, you maybe can't relate to allowing yourself the glory of the moment, the thrill of accomplishment, and yet STILL know... that that behavior ONLY has it's place on that field, and not out in the community.
Perhaps we'd have less movie theaters and schools being shot up if less kids played 'soccer'. The rules of hockey 'allow' fighting for a reason... hit with fists, not with six foot long, hardwood sticks. One outlet for 'letting off steam' to avoid the ascension to greater violence.

(steps down from soap box) Uh, sorry.
G Fawkes chapter 3 . 1/12/2014
Re: first few moments of this, the third chapter.

Ron didn't spend "the summer" working for his brothers... it was the last two weeks of summer, after he sat on his lazy ass the other six weeks, even knowing Harry wasn't coming to visit until mid-August!
Kinda' like, "Hi Harry! Oh, by the way, I'm leaving now, and so is Ginny... Have fun sitting here listening to my harpy of a mother! Glad you could come stay!"
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What good is it to Snape, to think he can wait all the way to the final exam, and if Harry doesn't get an Outstanding, he's going to throw him out?! I guess you mean for 7th year?
G Fawkes chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
"Competent' might be a stretch, describing Arthur's abilities and new position. 'Light minded'-yes, well intentioned- yes, but nearly every pureblood's eyes in Britain rolled when they read about muggles and 'ecceltricity'. Even Umbridge wasn't stupid enough to put out some of her most radical ideas in the news, for people to see. Keeping one's cards closer would be advisable.
If I was a pureblood supremacist, I'd already be flooing my nearest death eater for a talk.
moosejuice5 chapter 18 . 11/19/2013
okay but it feels done
darkdruid chapter 7 . 4/27/2012
how awesome! You guessed snape's secret so long before it was released! Hatsoff
Marauder Neyo chapter 12 . 12/31/2011
Uh-oh! What's Voldie up to this time?

BTW, great chapter DescendantofVoldemort! :D
Marauder Neyo chapter 10 . 12/31/2011
Start up the DA again... Interesting...

BTW, great chapter! :D
Marauder Neyo chapter 9 . 12/31/2011
Sometimes, your greatest strength can also be ... your greatest weakness.

BTW, great chapter! :D
Marauder Neyo chapter 8 . 12/31/2011
Aww... The Enchanted Tree... how sweet...

Great chapter BTW! :D
Marauder Neyo chapter 7 . 12/31/2011
Legilimency? Wow... Wish I knew how to do that...

BTW, great chapter! :D
Marauder Neyo chapter 6 . 12/31/2011
Jumped out the window? Wow!

BTW, great chapter... ;)
Marauder Neyo chapter 5 . 12/31/2011
What the-... Cho Chang fell! Hmm...

BTW, great chapter! :D

I should really learn how to fly next time... Hehe...
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