|Reviews for Amy daughter of Onlee|
| Shadow nin chapter 57 . 12/29/2013
I love this book. It has an amazing twist and an after story
| Midnight Cold Dragon chapter 26 . 12/17/2013
*jaw hits floor*
this was pretty boss!
| Midnight Cold Dragon chapter 11 . 12/17/2013
| twibe chapter 14 . 10/7/2013
I really like this story, but please tell me is this going to be one of those stories where exes come into okay and ruin things ? Or new ones like haldir coming in between being evil and all? I really want to know, for if it is so I don't know if I can continue reading..
| Larisya chapter 11 . 3/31/2013
There are A LOT of little, subtle LOTR movie quotes in here, and this chapter it has become glaringly obvious it is truly purposeful, though not unpleasant.
| Larisya chapter 2 . 3/30/2013
BridLE, not bridAL. Nice though. I AM still reading, after all.
| Yue137 chapter 5 . 1/2/2013
I know this story has been finished some time ago.
But I still want to share my toughts about the first chapters. And also explain why I am not sure whether I want to keep on reading.
I generally like your style of writing. It is detailed and vivid. As a reader I am able to really picture what the characters are doing, how they are moving, etc.
The Prologue was definitely interesting and I also really liked the reference to Amys painting at the end of chapter 1.
The idea that Amy lands in the LotR world after sleeping in a hollow is also believable and interesting. The description of the fight in chapter 2 was also quite good.
Concluding, there actually are a lot of aspects about this story that I liked.
But on the other hand there were so many moments where I just tought: "What? I really dont get why that happened."
The most confusing part is the one about Amys mother. In the Prologue she is described as being very happy about receiving Amy. In the next chapter it is mentioned out of nowhere that she beats her with a belt. And even more confusing, in the following chapter it is said that she still loves her, altough she still beats her up.
Sure, that Amys mother does not treat her well gives Amy another reason to want to flee from her world.
But I still find this very confusing and illogical.
What also needs a little bit more explaination is why Amy is an outcast in the real world even tough she is apparently pretty amazing and beautiful.
And finally: why Amy has got a sword is explained in the Prologue. But I dont really understand why she had felt the urge to make a bow for herself.
Its just an odd thing to do out of no reason for a girl that is taking her GCSE exams.
| Beatriz chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
I know this story's been posted, well, a long time ago.. but I just read the first chapter. Very interesting! :D
| alexiana75 chapter 41 . 11/15/2012
Wow. Super sweet! Legolas has a brother!
| alexiana75 chapter 39 . 11/15/2012
An "A" for Moridin! And another amazing chapter!
| alexiana75 chapter 36 . 11/15/2012
Oh, my! I have tears from laughing! Poor Moridin!
| alexiana75 chapter 33 . 11/15/2012
This was amazing! Moridin's birth was amazing too. But this one...I never hade a thought about Nazgul's horses.
| alexiana75 chapter 27 . 11/15/2012
I hope you will not let Haldir die! I know you allready finished the story. I just can't help myself not to tell you this!
| alexiana75 chapter 26 . 11/15/2012
Auch! Is that really happened? What, she is going to be a multi-partner girl?
| alexiana75 chapter 24 . 11/15/2012
Another wonderfull, sweet moment: Aragorn and Legolas putting flower in her hair. I love your writing and such moments make even the boring chapter much more interesting...Still, it was nothing boring so far!