Reviews for A Moment in Time
hzlanderson chapter 35 . 2/5
Beautiful story! Well written plot. Not terribly well laid out though so slightly confusing in parts.
Luzula-spicata chapter 32 . 1/5
Merci beaucoup pour cette magnifique histoire
HetaPhiPuffPrincess chapter 20 . 1/3
Yasss to the Verse! I hate when they make one of them soley submissive it almsot seems unrealistic. Especially because neithers personality is soley submissive . Loving this atory!
Era Aonsa chapter 25 . 2/20/2023
this chapter broke me, this should have an angst tag because what the hell.. too emotional man.. so well written
Luzula-spicata chapter 35 . 1/24/2023
Merci beaucoup pour cette excellente histoire
GleeLover243 chapter 1 . 12/16/2022
Will you PLEASE ADD YOUR FIC to Achieve of our Own.

is great but sometime the site is down for like hours and some browser dont use this website on my phone/computer.

Also I know many use this website over FanFiction so you'll get many views there.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/12/2022
Guest chapter 20 . 7/5/2022
Remus is confident that Harry is a cocksucker who knows that taking it up the ass is something that author must do, for the it is the author who sucked more cock than anything.
Guest chapter 35 . 5/7/2022
Two small things:
1) You never explain HOW Harry could have 3 animagus forms
2) What happened to Mrs Weasley? (Like did she ever remember Harry)
Guest chapter 35 . 5/7/2022
I love this story ️
Occasionally I would be a little thrown by little errors (like Ginny’s full name is actually Ginervra) but I remember it was written before that and it doesn’t matter anyway :)
It was sweet, at times heartbreaking, and just a fantastic read
My only complaint is the lack of division between scenes/character pov changes, but I know FFN can be a nuisance sometimes
Guest chapter 32 . 5/7/2022
"Potter, do you mind? You're sitting in the mashed potatoes," Snape said calmly as he continued to eat, as though having Harry Potter returning once more from the grave and sitting amidst one's dinner was a common event

Best line ever
adafrog chapter 35 . 4/29/2022
Great story, thanks.
thatkamigirl chapter 2 . 2/5/2022
That Neko person is mad as hell for what? I’ve barely even started this story and from what I’ve read it can be that bad to where you write a page long of reviews.
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 35 . 2/3/2022
I hate this story. There, I said it.
Do I want to recommend this story? Absolutely not.
Would I recommend this story after complaining about how I couldn't stop reading it even though I was full of grievances? Yes.

There are a lot of issues with this story, as I've not been quiet you certainly know.

I strongly detest and despise how you've written Harry. He's so unlikable and a fully contemptible being.

According to the Harry Potter you've written, I shall never forgive you for something you couldn't have possibly or reasonably known.

But all of that being said, I am serious about how I would still recommend this story even though I couldn't stop complaining. What can I say? Interesting plot. Well written. (Spelling and grammar mean nothing here.) Out of all the useless changes, and the awful Harry, it was difficult to walk away and I really despised, out of everything, real life pulling me away from this fucking story.

I am a firm believer in "don't like, don't read". I COULDN'T STOP READING. That's on you. Again, according to the Harry you wrote, you're to blame for a 'me' issue.

So... thanks? I guess?
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 27 . 2/3/2022
... So, not only do you need to learn the difference of 'woman' and 'women', but 'then' and 'than'.

*cheers* Here's to hoping you've learned in the fifteen plus years!
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