|Reviews for A Moment in Time|
| Era Aonsa chapter 25 . 2/20
this chapter broke me, this should have an angst tag because what the hell.. too emotional man.. so well written
| Luzula-spicata chapter 35 . 1/24
Merci beaucoup pour cette excellente histoire
| GleeLover243 chapter 1 . 12/16/2022
Will you PLEASE ADD YOUR FIC to Achieve of our Own.
is great but sometime the site is down for like hours and some browser dont use this website on my phone/computer.
Also I know many use this website over FanFiction so you'll get many views there.
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/12/2022
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/5/2022
Remus is confident that Harry is a cocksucker who knows that taking it up the ass is something that author must do, for the it is the author who sucked more cock than anything.
| Guest chapter 35 . 5/7/2022
Two small things:
1) You never explain HOW Harry could have 3 animagus forms
2) What happened to Mrs Weasley? (Like did she ever remember Harry)
| Guest chapter 35 . 5/7/2022
I love this story ️
Occasionally I would be a little thrown by little errors (like Ginny’s full name is actually Ginervra) but I remember it was written before that and it doesn’t matter anyway :)
It was sweet, at times heartbreaking, and just a fantastic read
My only complaint is the lack of division between scenes/character pov changes, but I know FFN can be a nuisance sometimes
| Guest chapter 32 . 5/7/2022
"Potter, do you mind? You're sitting in the mashed potatoes," Snape said calmly as he continued to eat, as though having Harry Potter returning once more from the grave and sitting amidst one's dinner was a common event
Best line ever
| adafrog chapter 35 . 4/29/2022
Great story, thanks.
| thatkamigirl chapter 2 . 2/5/2022
That Neko person is mad as hell for what? I’ve barely even started this story and from what I’ve read it can be that bad to where you write a page long of reviews.
| Ai Neko Yokai chapter 35 . 2/3/2022
I hate this story. There, I said it.
Do I want to recommend this story? Absolutely not.
Would I recommend this story after complaining about how I couldn't stop reading it even though I was full of grievances? Yes.
There are a lot of issues with this story, as I've not been quiet you certainly know.
I strongly detest and despise how you've written Harry. He's so unlikable and a fully contemptible being.
According to the Harry Potter you've written, I shall never forgive you for something you couldn't have possibly or reasonably known.
But all of that being said, I am serious about how I would still recommend this story even though I couldn't stop complaining. What can I say? Interesting plot. Well written. (Spelling and grammar mean nothing here.) Out of all the useless changes, and the awful Harry, it was difficult to walk away and I really despised, out of everything, real life pulling me away from this fucking story.
I am a firm believer in "don't like, don't read". I COULDN'T STOP READING. That's on you. Again, according to the Harry you wrote, you're to blame for a 'me' issue.
So... thanks? I guess?
| Ai Neko Yokai chapter 27 . 2/3/2022
... So, not only do you need to learn the difference of 'woman' and 'women', but 'then' and 'than'.
*cheers* Here's to hoping you've learned in the fifteen plus years!
| Ai Neko Yokai chapter 25 . 2/3/2022
I laughed when Harry was, in more pleasant words, told to get the hell over himself. By his parents.
And look, he died. *shrug* Maybe he won't be such a miserable ass for the rest of the story. I'm all for Ron and Hermione bashing and for Harry to be all rogue, but they didn't actually do anything wrong to warrant or justify him being a smarmy POS.
| Ai Neko Yokai chapter 23 . 2/3/2022
I was sorely tempted to copy and paste my previous comment about Harry being a shit.
Yes, I can understand Harry's hurt. But Ron literally saw his sister being murdered by what was supposed to be his best friend. And for Harry to be so SELFISH? He doesn't deserve the apologies at this point. He deserves a smack to the face. Like, with a mallet or something hard.
Harry has unreal expectations and his disgusting guilt tripping... He's straight up manipulative and that's something that is unforgiveable. Ron and Hermione didn't lie.
I hope Harry ends up dead by the end of this. Not sorry.
"Oh poor orphan Harry! People should think horrible of that mean Weasel who watched his sister murdered by that orphan! You should always think better of the murdering orphan who has no family than the weasel who has six other siblings."
Freaking guilt porn. You nailed it. Now if only you can nail the spelling of woman.
| Ai Neko Yokai chapter 20 . 2/3/2022
A thing that really irritates me about Harry being angry at Ron and Hermione, was that Ron and Hermione said they witnessed Ginny being murdered. What were they supposed to think? After having WITNESSED the murder, were they supposed to go "Gee, golly, I saw Harry murder Ginny. Must've been someone else even though there's all this other evidence that goes along with what I directly saw."
And he has this unreal expectation for everyone to think the evidence- -that goes along with what Ron and Hermione directly saw- -is wrong, fake, fabricated. He expected everyone to think Ron and Hermione are liars for his benefit.
Damn, this Harry is so fucking selfish and I hate him. He's a terrible person. Unreasonable. Damn, I'd argue he's just like his grandfather. He doesn't deserve people wanting to mend the fences. He's being an unjustifiable shit.