Reviews for A Moment in Time
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 25 . 2/3/2022
I laughed when Harry was, in more pleasant words, told to get the hell over himself. By his parents.

And look, he died. *shrug* Maybe he won't be such a miserable ass for the rest of the story. I'm all for Ron and Hermione bashing and for Harry to be all rogue, but they didn't actually do anything wrong to warrant or justify him being a smarmy POS.
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 23 . 2/3/2022
I was sorely tempted to copy and paste my previous comment about Harry being a shit.

Yes, I can understand Harry's hurt. But Ron literally saw his sister being murdered by what was supposed to be his best friend. And for Harry to be so SELFISH? He doesn't deserve the apologies at this point. He deserves a smack to the face. Like, with a mallet or something hard.

Harry has unreal expectations and his disgusting guilt tripping... He's straight up manipulative and that's something that is unforgiveable. Ron and Hermione didn't lie.

I hope Harry ends up dead by the end of this. Not sorry.

"Oh poor orphan Harry! People should think horrible of that mean Weasel who watched his sister murdered by that orphan! You should always think better of the murdering orphan who has no family than the weasel who has six other siblings."

Freaking guilt porn. You nailed it. Now if only you can nail the spelling of woman.
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 20 . 2/3/2022
A thing that really irritates me about Harry being angry at Ron and Hermione, was that Ron and Hermione said they witnessed Ginny being murdered. What were they supposed to think? After having WITNESSED the murder, were they supposed to go "Gee, golly, I saw Harry murder Ginny. Must've been someone else even though there's all this other evidence that goes along with what I directly saw."

And he has this unreal expectation for everyone to think the evidence- -that goes along with what Ron and Hermione directly saw- -is wrong, fake, fabricated. He expected everyone to think Ron and Hermione are liars for his benefit.

Damn, this Harry is so fucking selfish and I hate him. He's a terrible person. Unreasonable. Damn, I'd argue he's just like his grandfather. He doesn't deserve people wanting to mend the fences. He's being an unjustifiable shit.
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 15 . 2/1/2022
I'm glad it had finally been pointed out that Voldemort would be expanding after he's done tackling one place. He's a cancer. Just keeps spreading.
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 14 . 2/1/2022
I couldn't figure out why you would want to name their children Matthew and Evan. They're terrible names. Now I see why and I'm just patting myself on the back. I really hope religion isn't shoved down our throats again. (Although I'm starting to see why Harry wants to be pathetic and play victim.)

By the way, Draco's birth year is the same as Harry's. And he's only a little over a month older. Didn't have to change that either when being funny about age.
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 13 . 2/1/2022
I'm not sorry when I say I hate Harry right now. A whole bunch. I do not accept his reasoning at all, and it's a good thing it's not up to me if the apology is accepted or not. I don't like it when people cry about being single parents when they did, in fact, have the other parent in their lives that they chose to leave out. This wasn't an abuse situation. This was an intentional act of isolation and, yeah, no. I get not wanting Lucius to know, but it's upsetting that Harry expected more from everyone else and then hypocritically goes "I expect you to trust my character in blind faith while I will disparage yours fully knowing better."
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 12 . 1/31/2022
Oh, this is so frustrating. Why not point out that if Voldemort won there, he'd obviously expand to the Americas. Directly placing Evan and Matthew in danger. *silently screaming to the point where if someone were to look at me, they'd think I needed to go back to the happy house rahhhhhh*
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 9 . 1/31/2022
Before continuing this chapter, I want to apologize for the review I left in the previous chapter and then I seemingly stopped. I understand why FFN is using Cloudflare, but that damn service is making this whole site difficult. Caused Chrome to freeze a few minutes after it took a few recycling whatever it does, and Chrome freezing makes my computer freeze. I just 'noped' for the night.

I know I've been disliking some inconsistencies, maybe poor phrasings, but I am starting to really enjoy this story. Like, I'm on board. Took a bit, but I'm here. Enjoying and having the reactions I would have had even if I wasn't being an a-hole. (They were told Harry (James) died.) Hell, that's a reaction I would have had if I was reading this in real time before this story was even completed! (In other words, that was one hell of a cliffhanger. And then for the domino effect before I was able to finish this chapter, well, that was a negative cliffhanger... o.0"

Chapter 9 review:
The moment the kids were brought up, I'm like, yeah, okay, that really was Harry. Don't I feel bamboozled :D
Guest chapter 35 . 1/31/2022
I first read this story a few years ago and thought it was amazing. After just re-reading the story I feel that it is even better than the first time. You are an incredible writer!
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 8 . 1/30/2022
Oh, damn you, why did I keep reading this? Why did you throw that curve ball at the end here?!
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 4 . 1/30/2022
So, now I am confused. In chapter 2, you explicitly wrote (emphasis mine), "The blonde man was amazed at how once Voldemort had succeeded in FRAMING Potter and having him safely tucked away out of sight, he just seemed to dismiss him completely."

Why would you write that if it was not a known fact? At no point did you make it seem like that was an opinion of Draco's, so it is taken as a provable fact. (Provable to the Order.) You made it seem like it was an admission at one point and that's why Draco knew Harry was innocent. In this chapter, though, Draco is relying on what he knew about Harry after they became friends. That makes NO sense. I seriously was expecting him to tell Harry that he knew he was framed by Voldemort. Like he said in chapter 2.

There's some serious holes in your story and it's making it less enjoyable. I'm irritated that no one else pointed this out, so either it was overlooked or I'm missing something. (Which is entirely possible; I misread things. But I'm just saying because that's irritating.)
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 3 . 1/30/2022
It just hit me that Draco and Severus knew the truth, they're in the Order, why didn't they tell the Order about it having been Voldemort and that Voldemort framed Harry? That makes nooooo sense!
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 2 . 1/30/2022
I'm typing this first part out because I forgot the spirit of disclaimers and found another zinger: You can't possibly be sued as Virginia A Weasley is not a character.

Okay... I'll knock it off. Here's the real review for Chapter 2:
I'm excited to go to the next chapter. So there's that, too.
Ai Neko Yokai chapter 1 . 1/30/2022
I really don't see what valid reason you could have possibly had for not making sure you knew her name? Harry is innocent by reason of there being no Virginia A Weasley. You can't kill someone who doesn't exist. Next. Harry James Gryffindor Potter? What? (Please, put an audible emphasis on that 'h' in 'what' while you're at it.) That's more obnoxious than people who straight up argue that Harry's first name is Harrison. I get this is fanfiction, but what liberty are you exercising? Infuriation? Rectal cramps?

The plot is interesting. That's really all you got so far. Better situation for you than Harry who was sentenced for a murder he couldn't have committed.
erichg chapter 2 . 11/25/2021
uhmmm., I'm so confuse.:'!
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