Reviews for In Mourning
Just so you know chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Lizzy was an architect, not an archaeologist.
Capra124 chapter 1 . 8/15/2003
Great response. Trip needs to vent and grieve. Keeping the anger and the grief locked up inside will eat him up from inside, leaving a tired, worn husk of a person that he once was and that isn't healthy. Since he's too close to Malcolm and to Jon, Hoshi is just the person to turn to when it all becomes too much for him. Once he's been able to come to terms with the loss of his beloved sister, he can let the others in and can share with them the pain he's experiencing...the loss of a close family member is never easy, so Trip's gotta share it with someone else...whoever that person might be.

Great job.
Drakcir chapter 1 . 8/9/2003
aw, is this gonn off?

it wood b gr8 if u added more chapters

i really liked this
Trip Calhoun's Girl chapter 1 . 8/6/2003
Very good! I would like to see some Tu/S in this story, but even so this was very well written. You write good! Keep it up!