Reviews for Playing in the Street
Mindy chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
I think this story is great. It is very funny to. I like your style of writing. At this moment I have read three of your story's and each one of them was good. So keep it up. I am deffenitly going to read all your other story's.
Sorry if i made any mistakes but English is not my first language. I am from Holland.
tmelange chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
Um...wow? Can I say friggin' WOW? I loved this! I *really* think you should keep writing these stories/vignettes because it makes me feel that my favorite show is still alive... Kudos and thanks for writing!
mispel chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
Ducks, hee! And the shoes, that was funny too. I enjoyed seeing Michael defeated. If the whole flashback is a dream, (and the only reason to think so is the author’s note) it should only be from Nikita’s point of view. But I wouldn’t want to give up Michael’s thoughts. The section works great just as a flashback. The way you write Michael, he comes across as more human and likable. That was definitely an enjoyable read.