Reviews for Allies
IsisMoon chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
love it
Mobile Holmes chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
WOW! i wondered what happened before family! SWEET!
Wild320 chapter 1 . 1/24/2003
I going through the gargoyles stories and found this story to be quite good.
kendra chapter 1 . 3/30/2001
that was good ! keep writting!
dma chapter 1 . 3/10/2001
this is an excellent story. i hope there is more to come. :-)
Scrub chapter 1 . 3/3/2001
I love Garagoyles and the X-men. This story was great.
Shadowfax chapter 1 . 2/15/2001
Awesome! When do we get more? ]
Rabe Adler AKA MagKnight chapter 1 . 1/15/2001
I'm just humble Reader and i shamlessly begign you to continue this wonderful be of litrature.
Katypie chapter 1 . 1/13/2001
That was pretty good and entertaining. I kind of wish you had more conversing between the Gargoyles and X-men then it would have been perfect.
dragonslayer chapter 1 . 1/3/2001
It was very good i jope you can make more on this x-men / Gargoyles. and how about a Gargoyles/buffy/angel.
Ghost in the Machine chapter 1 . 12/20/2000
Not having a blank line between almost every line might help legibility. Timeline note: I take it

this story takes place before Delilah was introduced. Ten Thousand? Xanatos going cheap? Grammar

needs a little polish. Murder, even of mutants, is still illegal. Every one who participates is

guilty of murder or accessory to murder before the fact. In New York, that's 20 to life for the

participants and possibly a death penalty for the actual executors. You forgot kidnapping.

Now despite all those nits I've picked, I still enjoyed this story. (I like happy endings, what

can I say.)
Heidi Doeing chapter 1 . 12/20/2000
This is a really well written piece. Keep up the good work!
Christa the Ice Priestess chapter 1 . 12/20/2000
sequel worthy