Reviews for In Fire Lies Redemption
Deb chapter 19 . 2/17/2005
I am truly enjoying this complex and detailed story. I look forward to more soon. I think the problem with people keeping track is that your additional characters are not familiar to them like the HP characters are so they have a more difficult time keeping up with the story particularly if they read it choppily. I like how you have brought the muggles into the battle and I love Remus' interactions with them. Your Harry is great too. Please write more. This story should really have more reviews considering the quality of the story.
Talix chapter 19 . 2/12/2005
D'oh! Not good for Snape. :-p

And the poor Maurader's Map! :-( Maybe they'll make another one? Sad!

Great story, I really look forward to reading the rest! :-) Thanks for writing, and sharing it with us!
Talix chapter 17 . 2/12/2005
Still very much enjoying, and I really liked Remus's cover story. LOL :-)

One suggestion would be to put a better deliniator between scene changes - just a line of dashes would be plenty, for instance.
Talix chapter 15 . 2/12/2005
Yay, Lupin's alive! :D And peaceful contact with the good muggles! And Harry correctly giving up on life! Fun stuff. ;-)
Talix chapter 14 . 2/12/2005
Heading towards Suicidal!Harry, are we? :-P Poor Remus. Glad Tonks made it, at least. :-)
Talix chapter 13 . 2/12/2005
I hope that we start getting some clarification soon, or I'm going to start giving up on caring about the plot and all of the carefully set up hooks that you've hinted at. :-P

The characters are really good, though! :-)
Talix chapter 12 . 2/12/2005
Well. That sucks, now doesn't it? :-P

Nice for Neville, though! :D Fun to make him a little more prominent character, as Rowling probably will in Book 6. :-)
Talix chapter 11 . 2/12/2005
Um, Harry is going to get a break eventually in this story, right? :-P ;-)

Looking forward to seeing what happens to Snape, still enjoying the competant Muggles, and I hope to learn what's up with them not being affected or attacked by the Dementors.
Talix chapter 10 . 2/12/2005
Wow, you certainly have the action and suspense bit down! This is one of the most exciting stories I've read in that regard! :-)
Talix chapter 9 . 2/12/2005
Poor Harry. :-P

I really love the Muggle survelliance on the wizard world, though, especially the nicknames they've given to everyone. :D I can't wait to see more of that! Dangerous business, of course, what with "Blankers" around - can't get caught! ;-)
Talix chapter 8 . 2/11/2005
Highly disturbing! Nothing like getting a Lich to teach DADA. ;-)

I also wanted to review your last couple chapters, but FF.N wasn't loading. :-P I really liked the brief bits of other people's viewpoints, and the last lines about Harry's stomach exploding and killing Voldie with an infection were pretty hilarious. :D

Loving the story! Can't wait to see Malfoy get his ass kicked. ;-)
Talix chapter 4 . 2/11/2005
Heh, I love seeing Snape get what he deserves for being a dick. :D Good work!
E.A.V chapter 19 . 1/4/2005
Fantastic Story! Brilliant! Marvelous! Stupendous! The critics are raving! The Streets are Going MAD! etcetera etcetera...Can I possibly express my admiration for this story enough?

no longer memberxxx chapter 19 . 1/3/2005
Great chapter again! I'm glad you'll be updating more frequently being as I'm a narcotic reader who is completely addicted to this story.

There were just a few grammatical errors (misspelled words, missed words, etc...) but other than that it was very good.

The only thing I really noticed was that Remus mentioned Tonks' name while being interrogated. Normally he wouldn't know any aurors names, they seem like a sort of secret service group to me. That might have been suspicious especially since he wouldn't have had any chance to communicate with Tonks before interrogation.

Great job though! I love all the elements to this story. Keep up the good work!

sirius the homicidal maniac chapter 19 . 1/2/2005
*sobs* oh wow, i'm reviewing like a normal person!

neville is maturing into a nice, scheming gryffindor! i never thought ron would ever use 'conundrum' in a sentence, in canon or outside it, while the author was still a self-respecting writer. but hoorah for you, you proved me wrong. verdad is confusing me. in the beginning, i thought verdad and lim were one and the same and now i'm all befuddled. but i still read! and now what of the maurader's map? that sucks. and where is snape going now? that really sucks. i doubt voldemort has summoned him to get him started on some hooked-on-phonics program? it worked for me...

yay, i'm so glad you got another chapter up; it's really made me forget about the fact that christmas break is over and i'll be back tomorrow...ugh...reality is pressing back now, but you're still a brilliant writer!
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