Reviews for Weightless
X.summergrey.X chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
gosh, its awful that this happened to her but i can also see it happening. maybe a second part of this should be made to hopefully see that she got better but then again this could stay as a one-shot.
this stories are so dear to me in ways because i honesty worry that this could happen to me, well perhaps it can happen to anyone really, but its something you have to think to your self, i love the way i am and i'm not going to change myself for some guy like that. if he loved me then he should love me for me.
anyways great story, really.
ChocolateReader chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
i like your writing style. i ve read some of your stories and i like them.
BeyondxXxBirthday chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
This was great. I wish you'd made this into a long story, because that's how great it is. :)

-T
Sydney.State.Of.Mind chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Oh my god I started crying, so many girls have this happen to them...and they don't have an Inuyasha to come save them, your story was so powerful.
KieraControversy chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
:) This is a chart of my emotions:

"My boyfriend's name was Hitzu Shinjioto. He was only one grade above mine. Class B. He had beautiful black hair that always smelled nice and he had big brown eyes that I could drown in for an eternity. He was everything opposite of what I was looking for in Inuyasha. He was wonderful and he always showered me with hugs and gifts and sweet words. He told me that he would save our first kiss for something special because he didn’t want to screw things up by going to fast with our relationship. He told me that I was the most beautiful girl he’d ever seen. I told him that he was lying."

- AW!

After all, he told me, people would talk a lot and blow things out of proportion. He told me that having a secret relationship was so much more fun that being all out in the open lovey dovey.

- Wait... What? :O!

She gotten so sick of it, and so scared that he would find out the truth eventually, that she finally told him to fuck off that Friday, and he told her that he hated her. That had hurt more than he would ever know.

- YOU NEVER TELL A GIRL THAT YOU HATE HER EVER, I SWEAR TO GOD THIS PENCIL IS GOING IN YOUR NECK!

'Ita! He really knows how to slap!' She though to herself, lifting her head up just in time to receive a hard kick in to her stomach. That one hurt a lot more. She cried out, but her voice wasn’t nearly as loud as Hitzu's rageful screams; "Dammit! Your not trying hard enough!” he screamed at her, his voice hateful.

- *Steam coming out of ears* I Swear to god, I will find a way to get into the computer and KICK YOUR SORRY LITTLE ASS YOU NO GOOD BASTARD!

"How DARE you lay a finger on her?" he demanded his voice deadlier than venom. Kagome watched them, terrified, unsure of what she should do.

-yayayayayyay! Get him! Hurt him! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD DO SOMETHING BEFORE I DO!

"I'm not perfect... I'm a freak. I'll never be perfect enough!" She kept chanting, still sobbing. Inuyasha squeezed her and softly told her to look up. She did so right away. Her blue orbs where scared and her eyes were red and bloodshot. She still looked beautiful, but in a sad somber way.

- *Tears up* :( That is so sad...and so cute cause of the whole Inu thing too... :)

"Inuyasha." She moaned, leaning back into him. "I think I have a problem."

- Yay! In the end, it's happy! Yay!

Thankyou for watching "Kiera's Story Emotions!"

Dear Author,

In all seriousness that was a great story. :)
KittyLover44 chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
That was such a powerful and well-written story! It really got you in, and the ending was so sweet. Well done!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
"trying to finger her secret place"

From what i saw you're 18, not 12. it is ok to put something a little more towards your own understanding of the human body.
Kaggs chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
wow. that was...wow. i dont know but i really think your phycic. i am ashamed to admit it but this EXACT thing happend to me...well, besides inuyasha coming to my rescue. lol. yes, my curently ex-bf did say i was fat and made me go on a diet, i stoppe eating for rwo weeks i grew skinner, everyone told me i looked fabulous even my mom. but it wasnt enough for him. is soon became seriously bulimic. and evryone noticed i was starting to get boney. but it still didnt please him. soon we went on a walk like tey did in the story, and he beat me till i was nearly dead. i woke up i the ER 3 days later. im curently at a healthy weight as of right now and im happy. jsut take my advice and NEVER follow my example. this was an awesome story and i loved it. keep writing other stories!
The Sacred Tree chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
that was good...keep up the good work
Silvermoon maru chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
I liked the idea and most of it but I think that with some editing plus a few more lines to slow the pace, it suddenly took, this is going to be fantastic.

Sulvermoon maru )
Raine44354 chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
i liked it, to bad that had to happen to kagome. i wonder what it would look like if you have it a couple chapters long instead of one. well w/e its still good.

oh... ya...

Inu ears are so KAWAII!
TsukikageNiiro529 chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
wow, i dont know whether that was funny or angsty...*thinks*, yea, major angst there, it just cracked me up about the part with hitzu getting mad...awsmly good
MinkyLove chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
Wonderfully written.
Uzamaki-Girl chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
This was so good! I would love a sequel to this!
Rachynn chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
Wow, I will never understand anorexic people.

This was a good story, very good.

Thank you!
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