|Reviews for Ryoga Chan, Uberman!|
| Psuriko chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
Hopefully youll continue this funny Ryoga-story.
Maybe a plottwist where Ryoga joins forces with happosai(Happo convinced Ryoga that Ranma is of the "sorts of ne'er-do-wells)"
| Ebiris chapter 1 . 8/9/2003
For some reason this idea is far funnier than it has any right to be...
I guess it just has something to do with the fact that it's most definitely original, and that's always a major plus.
A bit of advice - a lot of the time you're just going back and forth with the dialogue, you might want to put in a bit more descriptive text to immerse the reader in the story more. Rapid-fire conversations do have their place, but a lot of what's written here would read much better if it were fleshed out a bit.
Your characterisations of the cast are pretty good - Ryouga's little thought about that 'honest disgust that girls like' was bang on, and Ranma recklessly messing with Ryouga's head without considering the consequences was also quite appropriate. I'm a little worried about Akane though... her preoccupation with 'defending the city's underwear' indicates she's following in the Grandmaster of Anything Goes' footsteps a little too closely...
Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing what trouble 'the Uberman' and his sidekick can get into in future chapters, so good luck with this fic!
| bobz chapter 1 . 8/9/2003
i loved it.
keep writing this one, i think it's going somewhere good :)
| Seaidau chapter 1 . 8/8/2003
hehe, cute. Hope you continue this story.
| Koga Hibiki chapter 1 . 8/8/2003
All I can say is...
keep it up