Hopefully youll continue this funny Ryoga-story.

Maybe a plottwist where Ryoga joins forces with happosai(Happo convinced Ryoga that Ranma is of the "sorts of ne'er-do-wells)"

review 4/5

For some reason this idea is far funnier than it has any right to be...

I guess it just has something to do with the fact that it's most definitely original, and that's always a major plus.

A bit of advice - a lot of the time you're just going back and forth with the dialogue, you might want to put in a bit more descriptive text to immerse the reader in the story more. Rapid-fire conversations do have their place, but a lot of what's written here would read much better if it were fleshed out a bit.

Your characterisations of the cast are pretty good - Ryouga's little thought about that 'honest disgust that girls like' was bang on, and Ranma recklessly messing with Ryouga's head without considering the consequences was also quite appropriate. I'm a little worried about Akane though... her preoccupation with 'defending the city's underwear' indicates she's following in the Grandmaster of Anything Goes' footsteps a little too closely...

Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing what trouble 'the Uberman' and his sidekick can get into in future chapters, so good luck with this fic!

brilliant!

i loved it.

keep writing this one, i think it's going somewhere good :)

hehe, cute. Hope you continue this story.

All I can say is...

Oh brother.

keep it up