|Reviews for Coming of the Dawn|
| TOSoldtimer chapter 10 . 4/26/2015
I've been enjoying this story a lot, but I have a quibble about the sprained ankle. You can walk on a sprained ankle if you HAVE to. Hurts like holy hell but you can do it. I have, more than once. I'm heading back to the next chapter now.
| Guest chapter 30 . 3/14/2015
I thought that was pretty good sorry if I had to read this later on but this is my first time reading rk but at first I didn't think it was that good but I did like the story line I guess it just takes a good fanfic to make it better
| satomika chapter 28 . 9/7/2014
What does Chikamauga mean...?
| Syn'phasia chapter 4 . 8/10/2014
Hey! Aoshi does smile outwardly! （ω）
| am chapter 22 . 6/30/2011
honestly i think you should limit your responses to like maybe 100 words each. it is really said that half of you "chapters" are actually ur responses. I don't even want to finish reading this anymore because it is taking for ever for the story to get anywhere
| fifi46227yahoo.com chapter 13 . 5/30/2010
hey i was just thinking you could do a oneshot from the fireflys point-of-view. and have it be the same firefly both times.
| SRAS9 chapter 30 . 5/5/2010
This is a fantastic story with a very well developed plot! You did a great work! I'll read the sequel now!
| Jessica chapter 30 . 3/11/2010
OHMG. You need to write a sequel! I love this story, and i hate it when things end like this! plz,plz,plz,plz,plz,plz,plz,plz,plz,plz,plz,plz,plz!
| Nadya Lubov chapter 4 . 9/6/2009
This story is really interesting so far :) Can't wait to read more :)
| andreabennett2066 chapter 29 . 11/4/2008
LMAO. Great story.
Kenshin having talks with his inner Battousai & Rurouni reminds of Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha having talks with their inner youkai. Kind of makes ya want to toss both Demons and Kenshin a book titled: "How to stay in touch with your inner Battousai and Demon".
| comic lover chapter 30 . 6/12/2008
is there a sequel.
| aradow chapter 16 . 5/16/2008
Very interesting. The big thing I would say to you is to keep your Author's notes until the very end or the very beginning. Putting them in greatly disrupts the flow and emotion you create when writing. I honestly find the side notes distracting and rather aggravating. Sorry to make it sound harsh, but that's my biggest pet peeve when reading fanfics.
But you are doing an excellent job on writing the story. Keep up the good work!
| barefootandlost chapter 30 . 4/2/2008
Ah, I loved this story! Now...on to the sequel! WOOH!
| LeoDesirePassion chapter 6 . 1/6/2008
when r they gonna start feelin 4 each other
| LeoDesirePassion chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
Oh i lov the mix up here -sigh- wonderful