|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Key of Dagon|
| Sterling-Ag chapter 18 . 1/7/2004
Not a bad chapter. But it ended kind of abruptly. I think you should have made this chapter a bit longer or shortened it up just before the room of requirment scene and added that to the next chapter. It was a pretty abrupt and unnatural break for a chapter. Other then that you continue to write a good story. Thanks.
| Sterling-Ag chapter 17 . 1/7/2004
Short chapter, but still good.
| Sterling-Ag chapter 16 . 1/7/2004
Nicely done. A lot of fic writers go and give Harry marks that are way to good to be believable. Harry's not stupid, not by a long shot. But he's no academician either. I think you did well in posting believable owls for both Harry and Hermione. Like Hermione was a big suprise :) I also like the budding romance you got going on with Dawnie and Harry. Also, a nice understated ending to the chapter with McGonagall.
| Sterling-Ag chapter 15 . 1/7/2004
Aw...Very sweet. Nice bit of WAFF here. Well off I go again. I hope all of these consecutive reviews don't annoy you to much :)
| Sterling-Ag chapter 14 . 1/7/2004
Not a whole lot special to say other then good job...On I go.
| Sterling-Ag chapter 13 . 1/7/2004
Nice, I liked Dawn's baiting of Snape. I'm also glad you mentioned the OWL's. Though I think Hermione would've been on that the moment she set foot on Hogwarts grounds :)
| Sterling-Ag chapter 12 . 1/7/2004
Yet another good chapter. I'm starting to sound like a broken record here :) Though I thought it a bit of a stretch that Buffy could fly. She is the Slayer I know but I personally don't think she'd be able to fly a broom. That's just me though. It was nice how you got Dawnie to sneak in that first kiss. Tres' cute.
| Sterling-Ag chapter 11 . 1/7/2004
Yet another good chapter. I liked the scene with Hagrid. Also, the scene about Sirius was good. The scene where Dawn recanted her position about flying to Harry was very telling and quite again.
| Sterling-Ag chapter 10 . 1/7/2004
Another good chapter I like Buffy and Co.'s introduction to Hogwarts. The bit with the house elves was great. One thing I'm wondering. No mention of OWL results have been made. I know Hermione would be chomping at the bit to get hers and Harry would need to know how he did in potions. Still all in all you're doing great.
| DuckieDannie chapter 54 . 1/7/2004
YAYAYAYA! go Harry! )! great story! this made me really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really, HYPER! great work!
| Sterling-Ag chapter 9 . 1/7/2004
Pretty good chapter. The ending was very good. I'm suprised that Hermione didn't raise more of a stink about the prophecy though.
| Sterling-Ag chapter 8 . 1/7/2004
Fun chapter with Dawn's wand and Buffy's reaction to it. Thanks.
| Sterling-Ag chapter 7 . 1/7/2004
I got on a roll, I should have left a review earlier :) Well, I must say this is an excellent Buffy/HP crossover. You are avoiding a number of the fandoms cliches and working things into a very interesting story that is wonderfully paced and technically very sound. If you use a beta reader you really should give him/her props. This is a very clean fic technically. Which is getting increasingly hard to find on this site :) Well I look forward to reading onward. I'll drop a few more reviews here and there to let you know what I'm thinking. Thanks for sharing.
| DG1988 chapter 54 . 1/6/2004
That can't be the end can it, it was way too easy Voldemort isn't dead, is he? Also I think Harry went dark a little too easily, if you watch the show carefully you'll see Dark Willow was building inside her for a while, maybe since late season 4. But I do love this story though, just this can't be it.
| cflat chapter 54 . 1/6/2004
Wow... that was surprising! But it was still excellent. Can't wait for more of the story!