|Reviews for Ah, The Inventions|
| Tobi chapter 2 . 11/10/2004
It's an iPod! Isn't it?
I don't have any other guesses...so maybe if I do I'll come back later...
If I'm not the first person can I have a doggy bone?
And your computer is...well I don't know what kind exactly but I know that my friend has one just like it...I'd ask him, but...he's not here. (Can I still have a hug?).
Well, as for a critique...
This is a really fun story! I like it when I get to hear about Inu just dinking around in Kagome's time. It's also fun guessing what he's looking at before you tell us what it is.
I don't know if I have any thing else to add...besides maybe trying to make it flow better? Try just adding a sentence of two (more) of thoughts or what happens in between each "episode" of items. See ya...or maybe it's actually, read ya...
| ZeLLy907 chapter 2 . 11/5/2004
UPDATE! Please? ye know ye is a great writter!
| Inuyasha Obsession chapter 2 . 10/14/2004
That was a really great chappie! 10 out of 10, it was REALLY, and I mean REALLY funny! Who would've thought of writing about Inuyasha discovering the computer? Very origonal!
My e-mail adress is little_bird3
My two guesses are:
1. a piggy bank
2. a little jewelry box
I know that I didn't get it right, but could you say what it is in the next chapter? If I did get it right (which I most likely didn't!) please contact me!
| Inuyasha Obsession chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
Inuyasha is so... unmodern! Oh well, can't blame a guy who's lived in the past his whole life! That was REALLY funny! I liked it A LOT! I laughed pretty hard when he blamed the toaster for having a demon in it! You keep writing and I'll keep reviewing!
| The Almighty K.E chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
WHY AREN'T YOU WWRRTTIINNGG!
| Shikon chapter 2 . 8/17/2003
the iMac Apple Computer! Am I rite? Great story, finally something different that involves InuYasha getting curious! I'm loving it so far!
| scratch its.not.etay. cough chapter 2 . 8/16/2003
ya know what it is? its a really old...
*cough* i really shouldn't tell anybody, eh?
I love this fic, its so funny! _
| Priest chapter 2 . 8/15/2003
that was realy cute, i look forward to more. Ja-ne (_)
| GoddessMoonstone chapter 2 . 8/15/2003
*rolls on floor laughing and crying* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
That was GOOD! I have ideas 4 your story tho!
finds microwave and tries to stick a spoon in it
finds a vaccum cleaner and his hair gets stuck in it
finds a CD player
finds a telephone
I hope you use some of my ideas!
| Fire Kitty chapter 2 . 8/13/2003
your computer has a metal stem coming out of it? anyways you use a macintosh!
| SailorKagome chapter 2 . 8/13/2003
Nani...? I'm no good at guessing... Great and funny chapter!
| Kay chapter 2 . 8/12/2003
i have no idea what the riddle is, ...lol...but casn i steal your idea and use riddles in my story?ok, well i love your story, it funny...lol
| Ses chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
how bout he ends up in kagomes room and finds a 'something'
| Abunai Koneko chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
LOL! That was so funny! And cute! I can just imagine Inuyasha doing those things! Hee hee! Aw... still love Miroku more, though! Sorry Inu, but you've gotta admit, for a perverted monk, he's really cute! And sweet... and nice... I LOVE YOU, MIROKU! He he he... anyways... yeah. I like perverted monks. Just Miroku, though. Anyways. Byezerz! Great ficcy! RIGHT ANOTHER CHAPTER!