Reviews for Mutiny
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Really like it! But WHERE IS THE REST? :D
ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
Hm...

This would be good if you continued it.
saiko chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
UPDATE! please?
Catmint chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
This is a really good start. No more? Hmph.
kitfreaks chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
i like it and props to you for accuracy. it's rare that people manage to match the movies dialogue
savvy sparrow chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
Of course, Dreamgirl, love'! Might you be a wheathered seadog youself? In any case, I'm terribly sorry I left that out. Must've been havin' a bit of rum to forget such as that...
Lady Dreamgirl chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
Interesting, but you forgot to mention one of the most important things in sailor speek: rope and line. If it's coiled on deck or in the hold it's rope, if it's not it's line.
JessieRose chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
Good start! Please continue.
JessieRose
animeartist310 chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
T_T um... Howzabout a story? I have the entire movie memorized. That part was redundant. But, I must say, a very good tie-in to the movie. Hey, why don't you check out my mutiny story? It's coming along...
Usually Immaculate Aristocrat chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
hurry up! this looks interesting!
Nev1988 chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
I'd just like to say that your writing is very in depth and I love all the sailor jargon...I think your on a roll and that this is a good start...
Spicey-Muffin chapter 1 . 8/10/2003
Great story Mate, this is well written. I'm glad you actully took time and discribed our dear william.

I guess that's one main reason why I dislike Mary-Sue's. There will be long perfectly, detailed descriptions on what a character looks like, and their wonderful abiltys. however God forbid if there's even the Tinest notion to talk about the characters we actually come to read about.

*sigh* sorry for rambling... I **Really didn't mean to. *Grins* Great story Chap. I hope you continue and don't mind the Tilly rambles.

Hug, trolls, and pixie dust,

Tilly
guru chapter 1 . 8/9/2003
i thought it was a great story, although even though u depicted everything extrordinarily, sometimes, by using all those ajectives it may lead the the story somewhere else, and it may bore the reader, just a thought, cause even thogh there was that i thought it an exeptionaly well story.