Reviews for The End
Gerald Tarrant Rocks My Socks chapter 3 . 4/25/2005
;_; Sad! So sad! But it was good too. I think Sanzo should be the last to go.
Serath chapter 3 . 2/20/2004
You should put Doku's reaction. Have them meet Kougaiji&co. and tell them.
Mitsuue chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
Hello, Fuuei! I really really sorry cause I dont

tell you about the St. MichaeL's flower boy!

Also everyone know about this oledi so I dont

tell you! Gomen! Tell you one thing, I will

never consider him as my bf and now he is just my

kai-ko! o.k, wish you have a happy holiday in



Your best friend
Lo Xiang chapter 3 . 11/6/2003
Sniff...sniff...very...touching(watery eye T_T)

Nothing much to say just to tell u that make more fic and good luck!
Namassuki chapter 3 . 10/27/2003
Sorry, too lazy to login. Anyway! ME WANT GOKU TO SUFFER! WAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I'm evil!
shuichi-kun chapter 3 . 10/26/2003
whoa.. what happened there? all the stuff at the bottom wasn't really meant to be that way ne? oh well... cool fic. as usual. _ and i think it should be Goku cuz well... he's story might be the most suitable since er... he will die the last? gagh.. that didn't sound right... baka me... T_T
The Penumbra chapter 3 . 10/24/2003
your portrayal of hakkai's reaction is impressive... he almost scared me! _ continue soon ok?
O'Ylia chapter 3 . 10/23/2003
Maybe it's just me but I found a lot of shounen-ai references in here...

But it's probably my polluted, hentai brain. *whacks head* . When you stumble accidentally into shounen-ai fics, this is what happens... .

But it's logical to think that Hakkai would hurt and fall the worse of them all. Nicely done.

Ano...I know it's none of my business but believe me when I say my friends, even my best friend all have secrets they keep from me. And I from them. Friends can keep secrets just have to be there for them and keep the secret if they tell it to you. Gomen ne, if ur offended.

PLEASE don't torture them too much! Poor Hakkai...! *squeezes Hakkai*

Hakkai: Ano...YunCyn? Could you let go? I can't breathe...YunCyn?
Kenren Taishou chapter 3 . 10/23/2003
Every time i read a chapter of this fanfic...i almost end up crying...its beautifull! Wonderful choice of words and the way you incorporated the lyrics of Alone and For Real with the characters' thoughts is absolutely brilliant! an d i don't think there is any OOC in the way Goku & Sanzo behave, their feelings would have been just as you described them! This was Amazing! Keep up the good work!

Kenren Taishou

p.s. I've uploaded the next chapter of A Network of Webs (glad you liked the prolouge & yes, it is a reincarnation fanfic)and also the sequal to A Love Forbidden-Son Gokuh's Birth if you care to read...i always appriciate your reviews very very much!
hakkai-san chapter 3 . 10/23/2003
gomen ne...for i chanced upon ur fic a bit too late. but anyways, hope my review will make up for it. i love it. its so sad. there's tears in my eyes. aw...sob sob...

i love it. im glad i clicked on this fic. write more...
Kenren Taishou chapter 2 . 10/3/2003

When will you stop making me cry with this fanfic?

*sniff* *sniff* Poor Gojyo (blows nose)...i'm not the type to cry so easily but...this is a really good job!

Keep it up!

For bold & italics just upload your stuff as web page & the email is feel free to sent emails anytime!

Can't wait for another fic!

Kenren Thaishou
shuichi-kun chapter 1 . 9/27/2003
cool... a bit OOC.. and yeah, all your fic are great! keep it up! im rooting for yers!
vermillian chapter 2 . 9/23/2003
Is Gojyo really going to die?

*sob* *sob*
Azzie chapter 2 . 9/15/2003
Hehehe... Gojyo was the first to die! *jumps around*

Gojyo: Wah! you really hate me so much?

Hahahaha... and about the part u want to know bout who suffers the most... make it Goku! Then, Sanzo also would suffer!~! Hahahahahahahahah!

Anyway... got ur revs... Motto...Doumo Arigato gozaimasu!
The Penumbra chapter 2 . 9/12/2003
Hi there! do send an e-mail if you need something! If I can help, I'll do so willingly _

And please continue this fic... people tend to read, but not review! It is good, and I don't think I've come across another fic with the same story! Looking forward to your updates! :)
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