Reviews for Lonestar
xoxdarkpetalxox chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
awesome fic. You know i'm gonna tell you to update right? of course!
dmitry chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
wow! I can tell that this is going to be a good one! Please write another chapter soon dying to read it!
Mars05 chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Nice approach overall. However the mood you are creating is interrupted by the sentence fragment: "kinda like on the X-Files but real". However overall, its great. Make more chapters and add a bit more foreshadowing. :) Otherwise, keep writing, and Welcome to Fanfiction! (Im new here, too. Fictionpress is getting veery boring)

Bezita chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
It's been a while since I read any new fics and I think I like this one, the story seems to be similar to Lisa's scenario, but I'm sure it'll build up to become one of the best stories of all time heck It'll probably be even better than my story! Keep up the good work
SpOoKyMuLdEr1 chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
interesting... dun dun dun. could Parker be another hybrid perhaps? them little gray dudes are busy when it comes to the ladys huh? anywho, keep it up. it should be interesting to see where this one goes.
avidfan chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
Well done tart. That's really interesting.

keep up the good work


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