Reviews for The Rosenberg Inheritance
The Unicorn chapter 17 . 1/3/2005
I really like your story but one line in this chapter REALLY bothers me. Willow wouldn't compare tha amount of Microwave radiation she recieved to "standing a few yards from a radar". RADARs are extremly directional devices, if you stand a few yards from the transmitter in the beam then depending on the power of the RADAR and how fast the beam transverses you'd either have your eyes cooked or be killed. a powerful radar might even carbonize you if you stood in the beam long enough.

That's for air craft RADARs of course. Police "radar" would produce less power then a cell phone or the radiation leakage from a microwave oven.

Another point is that Microwave radiation, unlike radioactive radiation doesn't have cumulative affects. If she had no damage to her eyes (which are the part most sensetive to microwave radiation) then there was no damage and unlike radio cative radiation you can't get cancer or anything of the sort from microwaves.

The Unicorn

P.S

Sorry for the lecture, that line just hit one of my hot buttons. Hope you write more soon.

The Unicorn
NAB chapter 16 . 1/2/2005
Interesting developments. Nice use of Lou Grant, Rossi and Animal. Angel's death was well handled. It would now be interesting to see what will happen when Buffy finds out. The characterisation of Billie Newman is spot on, I can even see the actress who played her (Linda Kelsey) in it, so well done on that. One warning, Billie's inquisitive, but, not aggresively so. Rossi was more reckless in that way. He was the rule breaker, she played it safe. Bear that in mind when you continue the story, which I hope will be soon
KnowInsight chapter 16 . 12/15/2004
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spikespet2002 chapter 16 . 10/29/2004
Been reading this after finding Family Issues on another site. Really enjoying it. Killing Angel was an odd twist, but it works. Looking forward to the continuing saga.
KnowInsight chapter 15 . 9/1/2004
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fanficgirl8403 chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
i have to say that i read your other story Family Issues, and i could not stop untill i was done. i wanted to read it before i read this one. it was a great story and i hope that this one is as good as your other. would you please email me when you update this one it

thank you lauren
Ouatic-7 chapter 14 . 8/11/2004
Lunch seems kind of prosaic after the end of a Champion, gone and forgotten in less than a day. Of course, he's been gone before and the way time has been twisting I'm certainly not betting in him being gone for good.

Is Lindsay really dead? My husband and I always thought he should have his own show; small time legal work for demons and others in Oklahoma with some hunting when required.
KnowInsight chapter 14 . 6/16/2004
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Glad to see more of this story.

Good chap.

I knew Holtz was a reasonable man beyond the need for revenge that had corupted him.

Question though: What about the prophicy that includes a vamp with a soul in a pivial role in weather the world ends?

Lookins forward to more.

Am _
Harry2 chapter 14 . 6/11/2004
Well, Willow is showing the leadership I expected of her. Now, lets get everyone settled at the Hyperion, and find out who is manipulating things from behind the scenes.
KnowInsight chapter 13 . 4/4/2004
Well fucknut.
Hope Billie's plan works out ok.
More please.
Am
kalieris chapter 13 . 3/31/2004
Just wanted to say that I've been reading steadily through your stories, and enjoy them immensely. Particularly your characterizations - you are good at capturing the canon personalities in the dialogue (and if the events aren't always canon - isn't that what AUs are for, lol?). Best wishes on your nonfiction project, for the selfish reason that I'm really looking forward to updates on this story and "Bring Me The Head of Harry Potter."
K
SecondSilk chapter 13 . 3/26/2004
Another great chapter. I'm glad that it's still happening. I'm also glad that Billie's taking control over what's happening to her again, even it is relinquishing control. Many thanks.
Harry2 chapter 13 . 3/26/2004
Somebody has been messing with the Time lines! And that is not good! Time to get the trackers and the spell casters together and take care of bussiness! And like most of your loyal readers, we will be patient in waiting for your next chapter.
KnowInsight chapter 12 . 2/4/2004
Wow, very kewl. D
Hope to see more soon.
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Harry2 chapter 12 . 2/3/2004
OK. So Wolfram and Hart are involved somehow? That doesn't make sense since Holtz didn't want anything to do with them. Now Justine may be under some mind control spell, but that isn't W&H style.
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