Reviews for The End
annon0001 chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
omg i started crying...this was absolutly beautiful and SO sad ahh i cant believe it wow this is so ssadd...:(
third charm chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
i am sorry about you moving away but i htink it is one of your best stories so far i just totaly love it, it feeled with emotions and sadness but it is totaly amazing
nadine chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
NICE STORY!
I once moved to a different place to, i felt the same way, BUT you'll get used to it in no time, trust me!
ThatGirlIsabel chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
I read this knowing damn well it'd make me cry. And guess what? I'm crying. :(

But I'm glad I read this. The emotions and loss are perfectly conveyed. I especially loved this: "We've never had to close this place up before. This building doesn't know what it means to be empty. But I know it. I feel emptier then this place looks even with the last boxes moved out."

Sigh.
Annie chapter 1 . 8/30/2003
Lauren,

This was great!
jharts84 chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
Wow Lauren, this is really touching. I hope it helped you out.
AmyCarlson chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
I love the story, it brings back old memories. By the wa, who is narrating the story?
Boscosbabe55 chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
Nice story...it's amzing what moving from your childhood home does. I went back home when my family moved from my childhood home. I moved away over a year ago, but would go back to that house to visit, now I go to some strange house and avoid going home now
FaithYokas chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
Aw this was a really great story! i got really teary-eyed! thanks for sharing it!
tydavislover chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
AW! This was very well written! I pray that this doesn't really happen though!
PattiL61 chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
Wow! Great stuff. How sad. Sorry you had to feel that loss, but think of all the good times you've had there and remember them fondly. This story must be much how those firefighters and medics felt in the 6 FDNY houses that were forced to close. Great job!