Ahhh hard chapter to read. I haven’t cried over a fan fic in a long time. Sesshomaru’s sacrifice did me in D:

You created an actually viable backstory, especially for Sesshomaru, that’s fun to read. Well done you! So creative. I’m sad about Midoriko of course, I was actually kinda hoping they’d have something and this is coming from a huge Sess/Rin fan:D Alas I’m sure I will not be disappointed for romance in the coming chapters.

I’m very much enjoying your portrayal of young Sesshomaru. This is my first time reading a lengthy narrative of his early years and it’s so entertaining to peak into his father’s point of view of his son’s character deficiencies. Your style is also delightful, kind of addicting;) Thanks so much!

Excellent ending I skimmed a lot of it. I think the biggest issue with this story is there is a lot of speculative writing and it takes away from the action sequences and emotion but wow I am so glad I found it. Such a breath of fresh air considering what is written these days

That would have been more moving if it was less wordy...it’s hard to put my finger on it exactly but it lacked emotion. But I still love this story.

If only you knew about Bakusaiga when you wrote this ahhhh!

I just realized I got to this chapter and did not leave another review. Shame on me! OMG...so I've been looking for truly unique stories with plotlines that are compelling and not the usual. So far this story has not disappointed. I hope you still read your reviews so you know how amazing this story is. It's a bit wordy at times, but it's well crafted.

LOL by human standards she should have been married at 13-14 during that time

Interestingly slow start but I am still excited to keep reading

I thought Ashrem was dead after what Inutaisho said...
Poor Midorko, I feel bas for her. So much time trapped like that.

Well, here comes Rin. I like her because she's more relaxed, she makes jokes and stuff.

Although I started reading hoping for Rin to appear soon, I felt pretty sad when Midoriko was sealed.

I'm not sure I'm ready to say goodbye to Midoriko... It makes me sad. I loved their moment... Sesshomaru felt something, and that's good in itself. Is Rin going to be like a reincarnation or something? (of Midoriko, of course).
Wow, I don't know how to feel.

There is something about Midoriko that I can't help but love... or maybe it's your writing.
I'm starting to realize this is not a common love story, I don't think you're the kind of giving an easy happy ending... I prefer it your way.

I'm trying to put the pieces together with what I cam remember about Midoriko. It's a pitty she got violent after her brother's death.
I wonder what Sesshomaru will do from now on; his father is still trying to manipulate him.