|Reviews for Sweet Dreams|
| BamfIsAwesome chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
So beautiful... but I would have expected other people at the schol to be awoken and present, although that would ruin the "private moment" thing. Still beautiful. I love your ideas of what happened before the white house attempted assassination.
Keep it up!
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Bamf
| The Magic Pocket Turtle chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
Such a beautiful story. But you MUST USE MORE COMMAS. Your run on sentances break some of the story up. It ruins it a little. Otherwise it is very good.
| Angel Raziella chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
Very well done, I'm impressed. This one really tore at my heart, once again. Well done
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| Matteic chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
It's so cute (eh, I don't know telling in German. In english, it's not very easy (I'm french) so in German, oh mein Gott !).
Oh, Ich put Die in my Favorites.
| giveGodtheglory chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
That was a very sweet story! :D
Thanks for writing it.
God bless you.
| hannahbamf chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
Ohh! (sob) i loved it!(:')
| alance07 chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
Aw! What a sweet fic! I really enjoyed reading this. Such romance. *sigh* Anyway, if you have anymore Kurt and Ororo fic's with like... um... nightmare consepts? You should let the rest of us read them. :)
| Shian chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
Some advice: Go a little easy on the details, make your sentences flow with one another. Actually, surprisingly enough, I read that a lot of adjective aren't a good thing . . . weird huh? But I've actually found that person is right when I write my own stuff!
New sentences are your friends. . . :P
_ I only say this because I catch myself doing these things and seem to notice how choppy some of my sentences turn out. It's kinda hard to make sentences flow! *pouts* No wonder I give up so easily, I just can't get my sentences to flow darnit!
Overall: Wonderful job. I just HAD to read through this one a second time. _