Reviews for The Lioness and the Puppy Dog |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AW! This story was so cute! I love it! You're such a good writer, there was so much emotion and fluff! It made me so happy! Joey is my puppy dog, not Mai's. Back off! Fantastic story. |
![]() ![]() it sorta reminded me of cinderella, cuz mai just randomly left joey...but cinderella kinda sweet... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw shucks. That's so freakin' cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you should keep on going with the story. :) I really love it please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() How did I miss this chapter? Well, that was really cute! Joey chasing after Mai..he's so sweet. I have this nice feeling inside..after reading everything he said...aww I definitely think you should continue, extend them getting together a little. They would probably have problems sorting out their relationship, and this is written very well. I hope you keep going! Joey/Mai is one of my favorites but it seems to be dying out. |
![]() ![]() KJ: Ohmigoshohmigoshohmigosh YAY! Kristanity: They are back toge-ther! KJ: Hahaha! YAY! Love and cheer from KJ and her yami, Kristanity! *cheesy music plays* |
![]() ![]() Wonderful! I think it was one of the most beautiful written works for a JoeyMai fic. I could just picture him holding her and hear him whispering in her ear about being sorry. I nearly cried there. And I absolutely love the whole dream sequence of Mai's. The thought of her being held close in Red Eyes' wing. That's sweet. Well, if you do continue it, I'm sure it'll be great. I mean I love it as it is, so whatever you decide...If you do update, I'll be back! Great job! |
![]() ![]() Keep going! It's a great story! |
![]() ![]() To think I read this in two minutes! This chapter was awesome! And rather long. I can't believe I read it in two minutes! Well, continue please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() watching stars together is so romantic.. *sighs*. poor mai..joey just running off.. i like how you write things straight and to the point |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, how sad! i like how you kept them the same age that they're supposed to be. even though it may seem weird, it still works well! i love that part with mai and joey's jacket |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love joey x mai. this is pretty good. i don't mind fics that are sort of slow, its better than people falling in love like in two chapters! aw...joey's jealous |
![]() ![]() that is a cute ending but dont end it add more fluff _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw that was so cute ... * tear * |
![]() ![]() ![]() No! You can't end it there! I believe that you’re capable of squeezing in a few more chapters. This is one of the BEST Joey/Mai fics I have ever read and I won't let you end it just yet without a fight. So yeah... that’s about all the fight in me. What can I say, I’m a push over. I’m all talk - isn’t that just pathetic? Well anyway, please continue. This fic has so much potential; it’ll be a shame to let it end here. You kept Joey and Mai so true to character that it's like reading the transcripts for future episodes. So come on... throw me a friggen bone here. Groveling isn’t really my style. However, if you decide not to, that will be all right with me. Your fic was very entertaining and I hope you consider writing another one. |