Reviews for Idea
Tiriya chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
This was magnificent. I especially loved the archaic language used in this - it just seemed to suit Edea, and it gave the entire piece an incredibly haunting feel. Just wonderful!
Kitian chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
Intriguing.
Paper Bear chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
That was very interesting.
GyrosKairos42 chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
Beautiful.
PrincessMercury chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
I LUV EDEA AND LULU!
cirruscastle chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
That was beautiful. I usually don't have patience for poetry on this site, but the internal rhyme in this piece was effective in creating a sense of being awoken abruptly from a dream, where waking still blends into sleep. A few of the lines tripped me up a little, the last one for instance, but that is simply a matter of opinion. It really does remind me of Poe.