Reviews for Unattainable
saura chapter 3 . 12/22/2013
suddenly I feel like crying I know your feeling believe me
sauara chapter 2 . 12/22/2013
Wow!even thought Loki has no idea he still can win over a verbal fight
saura chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
you arrogant!
Guest chapter 3 . 1/5/2013
Why the fuck would you include a fucking song? Is that even considered a fanfiction? Seriously, you are fuckin'high.
Arieta Lyuis chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
I love this story! All of the characters are perfectly written. I always wondered about this pairing. However, never really thought it was possible until now. If Kotarou loved Mayura this would probably be the result. Thank you for writing such a fun story.
wandering on the road of life chapter 3 . 8/19/2007
That was beautifully written. This is what I like to call...

"Bittersweet". It was sad at the end though. Poor, poor Kou-chan. I only hope that his fiance will ease his pain and become his new lover. Don't dwell on the past too much. You have only to move forward in life. Hope you continue to write more MaLoRa fics. All the best.

Veritas Found chapter 3 . 7/10/2006
Very nice! I love how you mastered his mindset, and the flow was just gorgeous. Great job on this.
heka chapter 3 . 1/30/2006
wow. okay woot. wow!

it's really great, the way you've written his feelings evne though he hasn't appeared so many times in the show... thank you for writing this! :D

cookies for you!
suicide bomber chapter 3 . 11/15/2005
OMK OMK OMK! no... its so nice... its a LokiMayura nonetheless, but from a different view, it is not... Koutarou and Mayura? I think they make a lovely pair...

This ficlet rocks!

is there going to be a sequel? i hope not.. it'll spoil the mood...
LittleGreenWolf chapter 3 . 6/1/2004
Wow, really depressing ending in a way. Poor Kou-chan. XD Thanks for the read. A fic from Kou's POV was really refreshing.
Whitesiren chapter 3 . 4/23/2004
Wah! I was always curious about Koutaru's relationship with Mayura... and thought about what if he was in love with her. what a sweet story... so sad :(
Artzangel chapter 3 . 3/25/2004
Wah Kawaii! It's very well written and it's a great point of view. I love it. Kinda scary and sad but cute and interesting in the same way.
SailorIllusions chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
Oh, poor Kou-chan. Excellent fic, I just finished watching MLR for the first time, and the way you write him is rather plausible. Excellently written, hope to see more!
Akari-chan chapter 3 . 10/4/2003
Very very beautiful! I really like Kou-chan, was a cute fanfic! I CRY in the end... T.T Poor Kou-chan...
Chibi Team Rocket chapter 3 . 9/17/2003
AHH! My poor baby. ;_; I love Koutaro sou much. ::bows to you:: Than k you for writing a story about him.

It was quite an interesting read. While I didn't see him so overly obsessive with Mayu, there was definetely the feeling of him wanting her. And a rivalry between himself and Loki. Truely splendid. I loved it. XD You are awesome!

Kou-chan (and you) rox mai sox. :B
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