Reviews for Death's Pale Shadow
Paladius chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
That was definately fascinating... I really enjoyed the characterization and imagery... parts of this were almost eerie.

Usage of terms, though dub, was consistant, which was good to see.

A very nice, dark little story...
RBMIfan chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
It's 's 's very good.
R Amythest chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
Woah! Go Jargonelle!

It was very good and dark, unlike anything I've read before! Why can't more people appreciate this? *whacks the review counter* I loved it!
GothicAngel09 chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
wow..that was so awesome.I love the way you wrote that and I like the twist at the job!_
Sailor Comet chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
I like that the ending was a twist. Ya know, I'm reading along, wondering what that segment at the top has to do with any of this. . . heheh. Nice show. _

koosei chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
*blinks in astonishment* Woah. Interesting twist. definitely didn't see that one coming. I liked the way you wrote it to. Very effective. Probably more effective than it would have been had you used Ryou's POV.
keep writing!
Ja ne!
JudyNFran chapter 1 . 8/13/2003

... Yeah, wonderful review, I know.
Dreaming Bunny chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
damn. that was just totally awsome.