Reviews for My Sister's Murderer
Candi chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
Well written, a little fast-paced, but quite believable. And I always thought of Mai as 90% shallow. :-) But this works, very well. Good job.
Ashley chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
Certainly an original idea. Though I'd have preferred it if was a whole story instead of just small little bits at different points of DK. Perhaps if it was near the end and Mai was reflecting on her time on the island trying to get revenge. Or in the beginning while she's looking ahead on her mission. Something like that.
artemis347 chapter 1 . 11/7/2003
really dramatic keep going!
rhy-k chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
A surprising reason why Mi went to Duelist Kingdom. Makes her seem so evil.
sapphire999 chapter 1 . 8/29/2003
wow. that was really cool. i liked it a lot, it was beautiful yet incredibly sad and depressing.