Reviews for Focus
anonymous chapter 9 . 9/1/2013
very sweet story!
The matryoshka doll chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
This is an excalent story. I simply adore it
Ginger-Snapp chapter 9 . 1/8/2011
One of the very few inter book stories I actually enjoyed. You handled everyone quite well, and your version of the kids are the only ones I've been able to stand so far. I just have one thing: you ARE aware that the name 'Doris Crockford' came from Harry Potter, correct? Ginger.
Luna12 chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Great chapter. Action, suspense, fluff and great in-character descriptions!
Hedonia chapter 6 . 8/31/2010
Whoa, Numair REALLY DOES owe Rain.
Reader chapter 9 . 4/26/2010
I love how Volney talks, mmph hmph!
Lady Knight 1994 chapter 3 . 7/21/2009
Something happened with my computer and it submitted my other reveiw before I'd finished. As I was saying before my evil computer cut me off... Ouna's getting rich, Perin's getting attacked. All is good. V. funny. And poor, poor 'Mair. Abused, mistreated and a source of income. Couldn't stop laughing.

Lady Knight 1994
Lady Knight 1994 chapter 3 . 7/21/2009
Ouna is getting rich off of our poor mage's discomfort.
athemyst chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Love how you combine humour with suspense, and angst. Keep on writing!
Tsuki No Shuurai chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
hehe...very well done.
Inkbl0t chapter 7 . 3/17/2008
...Mph. Gnhe.

I swear to GOD, this has just become my most favorite DN fanfic there will ever be. :sighs in reverence:

(Do you know, I've actually been wringing my hair-my HAIR-as I've read this? It's terrible, I tell you, terrible.)
Fishy Rainboots chapter 8 . 2/17/2008
Great job! I am really enjoying it so far.
Wotcher Wolvie chapter 6 . 6/26/2006
Good!
Somebody chapter 9 . 3/10/2006
Oh wasn't that sweet? Loved it! I really liked how you portrayed Volney Rain.

Somebody
Mrs. Dom Masbolle chapter 9 . 2/8/2006
very good...i love married daine and numair stoires!
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