Reviews for Origins
Doomkitty1 chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
WONDERFUL! 'nuff said...
THE LIE chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
this was a good short story...if thats it of your short story neway it was good
Lex chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
Very good! I liked it, are you going to continue it? ~hopeful look~ Hope you write more!
Mercedes Watson chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
very cool story! i particularly liked how you started off the whole thing. please write more.