Reviews for Something More
amarauder'swife chapter 23 . 1/9/2019
SKSKSKSKSKSKSK
GO ON
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL
amarauder'swife chapter 12 . 1/8/2019
YES
HE SHOULD BE JAMES POTTER
AND YOU SHOULD BE LILY POTTER
i just realised how weird i sound shouting at a fiction character in a bloody fan fiction
excuse my mental illnesses please
thanks
amarauder'swife chapter 11 . 1/8/2019
YEA THEY DID
WHOO HOOOO
JILY ALL DA WAE
amarauder'swife chapter 7 . 1/8/2019
LILY
ACCEPT IT
HE JUST
ISN'T BOYFRIEND MATERIAL
FRIEND MATERIAL- SURE
JUST
NOT
BOYFRIEND STUFF
amarauder'swife chapter 6 . 1/8/2019
SKSKSKKSK
THE UNIVERSE IS GETTING BALANCED AGAIN
amarauder'swife chapter 5 . 1/8/2019
nO
LILY
THERE ARE SO MANY REASONS WHY THIS CANNOT HAPPEN
THE COSMOS IS AGAINST IT
SIRIUS IS GAY FOR REMUS
AND LILY LOVES JAMES
SEE
IT CAN'T HAPPEN
NOW LILY DEAR
WAKE UP
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2018
I absolutely love the names marilin Ohara ans Scarlett monroe. It's Scarlett ohara and Marilyn Monroe
Isla.mm chapter 23 . 5/17/2018
Are you going to continue this story because I have read it a few times through now and I NEED to know what happens next
Dontforgettobreathe chapter 5 . 6/13/2016
I love your story, I really do. But the first time you had Sirius coming to Lily's door, I thought it was just a lapse of memory. But then you did it a second time. I just want you to know that Sirius can't just walk up to their door there's a slide that will come out of the floor and slide him back down. Perhaps you might've already known this and just took it out for story sake. And that's okay if you did I just wanted to remind you. And also I love how you have Lily going out with Sirius first but then she goes out with James Potter but she does seem a little too much of a giggly girl and less of a smart girl. But other than that I think the story is absolutely lovely. Great first story!
Guest chapter 23 . 2/21/2016
I think u forgot about this cuz u left it un-ended in 2006 and its 2016. Please continue writing
Hermione Granger 123789 chapter 23 . 12/16/2015
I want a proper ending please, it is a great story...
notyourbusiness chapter 23 . 2/7/2015
omg. YOU LEFT ME HANGING! GRRRR
Someone chapter 23 . 1/25/2015
NOOOO WHY IS IT OVER
MAKE MORE UPDATES
PLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASE
THIS IS AMAZING
I WANT MORE
writingfornights chapter 23 . 8/9/2014
This is the last chapter you posted an you haven't update in years and I'm just gonna go cry in a corner now.
x Cindy
writingfornights chapter 21 . 8/9/2014
I just wanna cry this is so cute
x Cindy
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