I love your story, I really do. But the first time you had Sirius coming to Lily's door, I thought it was just a lapse of memory. But then you did it a second time. I just want you to know that Sirius can't just walk up to their door there's a slide that will come out of the floor and slide him back down. Perhaps you might've already known this and just took it out for story sake. And that's okay if you did I just wanted to remind you. And also I love how you have Lily going out with Sirius first but then she goes out with James Potter but she does seem a little too much of a giggly girl and less of a smart girl. But other than that I think the story is absolutely lovely. Great first story!

I think u forgot about this cuz u left it un-ended in 2006 and its 2016. Please continue writing

I want a proper ending please, it is a great story...

omg. YOU LEFT ME HANGING! GRRRR

NOOOO WHY IS IT OVER
MAKE MORE UPDATES
PLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASE
THIS IS AMAZING
I WANT MORE

This is the last chapter you posted an you haven't update in years and I'm just gonna go cry in a corner now.
x Cindy

I just wanna cry this is so cute
x Cindy

Oh wow that's so sad about Marilyn's brother.
x Cindy

They kissed! Thank gosh, I was losing my mind! This was too cute!
x Cindy

Oh how sad this makes me!
x Cindy

So cute!
x Cindy

I just wanna cry. My poor bbys don't even see how right they are for each other.
x Cindy

Oh no! Tears! This hurts my heart!
x Cindy

She called her a hussy! I'm dying!
Age finally realizes she likes James ! Flails.
x Cindy

Was that just the end? I can't even tell that's how good this story is. My personal favorite part was "Bloody hell no. Pucker up, Potter." Reminds me if something I would say to James Potter. Who doesn't LOVE him?!