Reviews for Something More |
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![]() ![]() ![]() SKSKSKSKSKSKSK GO ON THIS IS BEAUTIFUL |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES HE SHOULD BE JAMES POTTER AND YOU SHOULD BE LILY POTTER i just realised how weird i sound shouting at a fiction character in a bloody fan fiction excuse my mental illnesses please thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() YEA THEY DID WHOO HOOOO JILY ALL DA WAE |
![]() ![]() ![]() LILY ACCEPT IT HE JUST ISN'T BOYFRIEND MATERIAL FRIEND MATERIAL- SURE JUST NOT BOYFRIEND STUFF |
![]() ![]() ![]() SKSKSKKSK THE UNIVERSE IS GETTING BALANCED AGAIN |
![]() ![]() ![]() nO LILY THERE ARE SO MANY REASONS WHY THIS CANNOT HAPPEN THE COSMOS IS AGAINST IT SIRIUS IS GAY FOR REMUS AND LILY LOVES JAMES SEE IT CAN'T HAPPEN NOW LILY DEAR WAKE UP |
![]() ![]() I absolutely love the names marilin Ohara ans Scarlett monroe. It's Scarlett ohara and Marilyn Monroe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to continue this story because I have read it a few times through now and I NEED to know what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story, I really do. But the first time you had Sirius coming to Lily's door, I thought it was just a lapse of memory. But then you did it a second time. I just want you to know that Sirius can't just walk up to their door there's a slide that will come out of the floor and slide him back down. Perhaps you might've already known this and just took it out for story sake. And that's okay if you did I just wanted to remind you. And also I love how you have Lily going out with Sirius first but then she goes out with James Potter but she does seem a little too much of a giggly girl and less of a smart girl. But other than that I think the story is absolutely lovely. Great first story! |
![]() ![]() I think u forgot about this cuz u left it un-ended in 2006 and its 2016. Please continue writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want a proper ending please, it is a great story... |
![]() ![]() omg. YOU LEFT ME HANGING! GRRRR |
![]() ![]() NOOOO WHY IS IT OVER MAKE MORE UPDATES PLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASE THIS IS AMAZING I WANT MORE |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the last chapter you posted an you haven't update in years and I'm just gonna go cry in a corner now. x Cindy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just wanna cry this is so cute x Cindy |